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Nov 26 2007 03:35pm
First thing I've ever actually written without being asked to. It is more of a rhyming rant than a poem, but tell me what you think.


Animals

Light has dawned, eyes wide open
Nothing even the exterior could hide
Normal faces... normal people
Surprised that appearance has lied?

Expelling heavy desperate breaths
Under microscope, subjects are brought
Thrilled by drama and death
Wonder and curious thoughts

Indecency-wired systems
Fundamental flaws
Ersatz wisdoms
Hands change into claws

Reduced to zero
Dry goes the well of luck
There are no heroes
No one gives a fuck

Inner being reflected
Surface no longer deceives
Horns and boils projected
The deeds warrant what they receive

"Intrigue and excitement".
"Blackness and spiraling".
"Disregard and judgment".
"Voiceless sorrow and crying".

Consumed by internal affairs
Selfish, vicarious, evil
When dreams grow putrid and burn up in flares
Enjoy the animals looking civil
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Nov 26 2007 03:38pm
i shall copy this
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Nov 26 2007 03:47pm
Copyrighted. wink.gif
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Nov 26 2007 04:03pm
tl;dr
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Nov 26 2007 05:57pm
Quote (ii88 @ Mon, Nov 26 2007, 09:38pm)
i shall copy this


hehe yea ><
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