Tell me what you think about it, I dont know why it came 2 me, no Im not dissing religion. This is just a poem I wrote out of the blue, I have nothing against any religion.
By D.W.D III
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Religion is a invention,
Religion is your ascension.
It takes you to a higher place,
Or buries you in a deeper space.
It's full of deceit,
And fills you with conceit.
It makes you lie,
It makes you cry.
You become filled with pain,
and become insane.
It tests your will,
it makes you kill.
Religion is your ascension,
Religion is our invention.
It fills you full of hate,
and makes you wait.
It makes you fill safe,
and avoid your fate!
(C) David Walker Dennison III
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Now keep in mind that I have not critiqued this poem at all. I just wrote it down, saved it and forgot all about it.