Quote (CoolCat @ Wed, Nov 14 2007, 04:31am)

emo

Quote (drewtx84 @ Sat, Apr 28 2007, 07:29pm)

meh i made this poem when i was bored...quite emo lol. tell me wat u think about it. i haven't put much thought on it.

I used to be a was.
Now I am an is.
Screeching for safety as I decide to fly away from suicide.
Flickering my eyes as I put the knife out of my mind from suicide.
Desert winds grunt silently by my side preventing me from suicide.
Battered and bruise as I struggle out of my burden from suicide.
I used to be a was.
Now I am suicide.

rate my poem thanks xD

Quote (drewtx84 @ Sat, Apr 28 2007, 11:29pm)

meh i made this poem when i was bored...quite emo lol. tell me wat u think about it. i haven't put much thought on it.

I used to be a was.
Now I am an is.
Screeching for safety as I decide to fly away from suicide.
Flickering my eyes as I put the knife out of my mind from suicide.
Desert winds grunt silently by my side preventing me from suicide.
Battered and bruise as I struggle out of my burden from suicide.
I used to be a was.
Now I am suicide.

rate my poem thanks xD