Quote (Krayze @ Sep 9 2009 11:49am)
When I started to read it, I'm like "Okay I'm gunna tell this guy how stupid he
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but.. I like it
Cool story.
The only interesting part was the actual story though. You have to be good with words to keep them entertained through the not so fun parts.
This should tell you more than anything about it. This is about the level of sophistication you wrote it with...