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#21
Jun 10 2009 08:53pm
Quote (Kamikizzle @ Wed, Jun 10 2009, 10:45pm)
hey genius double major
i quoted cold and then went on to adress you. colds bday is 1991

and im SERIOUSLY not gonna read the entire novel youve left us with, but seriously. if you post your shit here, dont get butthurt if people dont like it

and how the fuck am i trolling?


For the bold? Save the sarcasm, trying to make fun of me for your fuck up? I lol'd.

And trolling? Coming back to my thread so you can ride eRiots balls a little more, = trolling. As I said, enough with this stupid e-drama. I'm iso some constructive criticism, that is all. Save your drama for the trading forums. There is no shortage of it there.

Lastly, I am not "butthurt". There is a difference between someone not liking it, and someone essentially calling me uneducated, which is plain ignorant.

This post was edited by mikeydubs5 on Jun 10 2009 09:02pm
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#22
Jun 10 2009 09:07pm
Quote (mikeydubs5 @ Wed, Jun 10 2009, 07:53pm)
For the bold? Save the sarcasm, trying to make fun of me for your fuck up? I lol'd.

And trolling? Coming back to my thread so you can ride eRiots balls a little more, = trolling. As I said, enough with this stupid e-drama. I'm iso some constructive criticism, that is all. Save your drama for the trading forums. There is no shortage of it there.

Lastly, I am not "butthurt".  There is a difference between someone not liking it, and someone essentially calling me uneducated, which is plain ignorant.


what fuck up are you talking about?
i quoted cold saying he was in highschool because he acted as if eriot didn't know shit.
umad?
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#23
Jun 10 2009 09:20pm
Quote (Kamikizzle @ Wed, Jun 10 2009, 11:07pm)
what fuck up are you talking about?
i quoted cold saying he was in highschool because he acted as if eriot didn't know shit.
umad?


Ah I see. My bad, that was my fuck up, but regardless. My statements stand for eRiot implying I'm uneducated. Anyways, he's not acting as though eRiot "doesn't know shit." He's probably just as surprised as I am that someone who may have a degree in literature doesn't believe poetry can be autobiographical. Anyways, if that's what they teach kids these days in schools about literature, and how to interact with others who write, then maybe we're better off without such graduates. Must have gotten a 4.3 in Ignorance and Cynicism. Anyways kid, I'm done with this ebattle. I will no longer respond to any petty arguments that continue in here. I'm already embarassed about how I've acted already. If you absolutely must continue on your little ewar then do so one sided, and leave your pettyness on here for everyone to see.

From this point on.. Please leave constructive criticism only guys. Thanks.
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Jun 10 2009 09:29pm
Quote (mikeydubs5 @ Wed, Jun 10 2009, 08:20pm)
Ah I see.  My bad, that was my fuck up, but regardless.  My statements stand for eRiot implying I'm uneducated.  Anyways, he's not acting as though eRiot "doesn't know shit."  He's probably just as surprised as I am that someone who may have a degree in literature doesn't believe poetry can be autobiographical.  Anyways, if that's what they teach kids these days in schools about literature, and how to interact with others who write, then maybe we're better off without such graduates.  Must have gotten a 4.3 in Ignorance and Cynicism.  Anyways kid, I'm done with this ebattle.  I will no longer respond to any petty arguments that continue in here.  I'm already embarassed about how I've acted already.  If you absolutely must continue on your little ewar then do so one sided, and leave your pettyness on here for everyone to see.

From this point on.. Please leave constructive criticism only guys.  Thanks.


ill consider this a victory on my part
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#25
Jun 10 2009 09:32pm
Quote (Kamikizzle @ Wed, Jun 10 2009, 11:29pm)
ill consider this a victory on my part


You do that princess. Stroke that internet ego

Thanks for the free bump.
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Jun 10 2009 10:45pm
Quote (mikeydubs5 @ Wed, Jun 10 2009, 08:32pm)
You do that princess.  Stroke that internet ego

Thanks for the free bump.


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#27
Jun 10 2009 11:03pm
Quote (Kamikizzle @ Thu, Jun 11 2009, 12:45am)
ysosrs


Persistent. I'll give ya that. lol.
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#28
Jun 10 2009 11:59pm
Quote (mikeydubs5 @ Wed, Jun 10 2009, 10:03pm)
Persistent.  I'll give ya that.  lol.


well you said im trolling, i gotta live up to the standard now
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#29
Jun 11 2009 10:08pm
Quote (Kamikizzle @ Thu, Jun 11 2009, 01:59am)
well you said im trolling, i gotta live up to the standard now


Haha I actually lol'd. Touché. Sorry for the stupid little e-spat. This is my attempt to bury the hatchet. No hard feelins. I actually am iso some constructive criticism on how to make a more even flow. Feel free to quote/edit, to help me make it more smooth. I have a lot of ideas, and tonnes of structuring to do to be able to put it to music, but again, iso some ideas. -Cheers, Mike.
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#30
Jun 12 2009 03:58pm
Quote (tedmore @ Mon, Jun 8 2009, 02:40am)
for your first poem its very good

hope things get better for you


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