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#21

Mar 28 2009 02:13pm

rightt? im curiousss

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#22

Mar 30 2009 03:53am

i have a habit of putting together little quips while trying to fall asleep. this is about not wanting to go to work in a couple hours.

The day today, so blue and true;
This I, so willingly, give to you.
The work you see it will prevail;
It may as well be Winter's Veil.

short, and bittersweet.

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#23

Apr 4 2009 05:32pm

Quote (Azurill @ Thu, Mar 5 2009, 01:34pm)

i wrote this just yesterday. for the one i love, the one il never see again.:cry:
also. im having the worst day of my life. quite a story of trust. betrayal. and loss.

The Role of a Lifetime

if you play a role long enough, and really commit, does it ever become real? could i... become real?

my life has always felt like an unanswered question.
a string of days and nights. waiting for something to happen
wherever i am, were some how connected, i can feel you, with me
your what makes me real. and i never wanna go a day without you
because something as simple as seeing you smile, is the highlight of my week
you, your part of me, a part im not willing to let go of.
and im going to hang onto you for deal life.
please. say yes. say you'll be with me.

most actors toil in obscurity, never stepping into the spotlight.
but if you hone your craft. work diligently. you might just find yourself cast, in the role of a lifetime...

Plagiarism at its finest, all stolen from TV show Dexter. good show tho

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#24

Apr 30 2009 12:23am

whos the winrar

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#25

Apr 30 2009 09:04am

Journey

I live this life,
Every day,
An ocean of emotion and belief,

I'm bound to this place called Mother Earth,
Who fills me with all of this grief,

My body,
My soul,
My mind,
My heart,
All ache for something more,
Long at night I stay awake,
Dreaming of whiter shores,

Then I come to realize,
That happiness is a joke,
All of joy is in my sleep,
From which I'll be awoke,

The only way to end this pain,
Will be to leave this world behind,
None of this can ever change,
Life cannot rewind,

Please God forgive me for my sins,
Don't cast me down to doom,
Have Peter open the Gates for me,
I'll come to join you soon

-Dakota Phelps

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#26

Apr 30 2009 09:07am

Quote (chonicbear @ Sun, 8 Mar 2009, 05:41)

meh i guess i can throw one of my poems in this lol
i wrote this poem out of boredom one day and i kinda liked it tongue.gif

I wake up the day is night
everything blurred and out of sight
I put my fingers apon a glass
remembering nothing but the past
my vision isnt what it use to be
now i have a dog to help me see
I walk not knowing were ive been
I rely on my one best friend
he keeps me clear of death's cold hand
for im a depserate old blind man

Do you care if I use that on my website, if I credit you for it?

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#27

Apr 30 2009 09:10am

Quote (Kamikizzle @ Wed, 4 Mar 2009, 16:42)

i ask because i know my type of dr seuss style poetry isnt very big with you. so if i were to enter a piece it wouldnt stand very well against others who write in a style more geared to yours.
im pretty sure ive posted most of my poems that i like, though i never got your feedback on my latest one nor have i posted my first one.

i suppose ill submit my newest one since its not my typical writing style :/

February 14th

I woke up the fourteenth by your side
and i thought this cant be real
To have a woman like you defied
anything that i could feel

But as i awoke and rubbed my eyes,
I saw you get in the tub,
grabbed my keys with intent to suprise
--off to the cannibis club!

babe i packed this bowl for me and you
let us have a little smoke
So we can do what those bad kids do
oh, the feelings you invoke.

i bought roses this valentines day
And theyre meant for only you
Come with me to dance to the DJ
Well stay out tonight till two

but if we dont make it out the door
i promise i wont say no
for tonight, it's our love we'll restore
while watching the melting snow.

Say "i love you" on this holiday
as i see that gorgeous face.
now in bed doing a love ballet
and once more by the fireplace

the fifthteenth is here but ill still say
"I will love you till the end"
And the smile on your face will portray
The time with which we spend.

Brilliant, read mine tell me what you think

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#28

Apr 30 2009 09:17am

Hi, I wasn't sure if we could post more than one... If we can then here!!!

Bliss

Sanguine rivers like a burning labyrinth snake within my being,
I tremble uncontrollably with my fist clenched to my
ring,

With every fleeting instant my anger begins to rise,
That ever steady drumbeat in my chest just will not die,

I desire with every fiber of everything that i posess,
To taste that bitter sweet metallic rill inside her neck,

Content becomes frustration,
Anger turns into rage,
Trapped within my torment,
I'm a prisoner in a cage,

This upcoming peccancy,
Is my impropriety,

Implacable reality,
Conflicting personality,

See me
Love me,
Hate me,
Hold me,
Let me cut out your breath,

Let me give you one last gift,
A quick and easy death.

-Dakota Phelps

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#29

May 1 2009 01:31am

Quote (The_Disputatious_Linguist @ Thu, Apr 30 2009, 08:10am)

Brilliant, read mine tell me what you think

are you trolling me sir?

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#30

May 1 2009 07:17am

Don't fuck up your front-squats
- Anon.

A crash of raw steel
The weights slip from lax fingers
Ouch, my wrist is sore

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