Quote (spartanman30 @ Wed, Jan 7 2009, 04:22pm)
yes..i do..er but do you mean that in a my writing needs help? or a i need general help..
cause i either way i guess i do.
lawl ><
For the first writing, I would just suggest that you make your writing more intriguing, bring the audience into your story rather than making it sound like a list of complaints.
Metaphors, similes, and a main thesis or idea would be good to begin with.
Try writing the single word, thought, image, experience, sound, touch, or taste you are trying to describe and keep relating everything to this.
Read my post tell me if you understand the difference (not that I should be used a template or example).
MOST importantly, don't stop, it never matters how strong or brilliant a person is. It only matters what they do with those talents to benefit others lives.
This post was edited by Pootmasta_P on Jan 19 2009 04:48pm