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#21
May 18 2006 06:01am
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No more hiding your face


i think you're missing a syllable there
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#22
May 19 2006 04:02am
i`m in luv heart.gif

keep up the good work biggrin.gif
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#23
May 19 2006 06:05pm
wow good you'll do that all your life and get $$$$ with that tongue.gif
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May 19 2006 06:12pm
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wow good you'll do that all your life and get $$$$ with that tongue.gif


go for the GOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOLD
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#25
May 22 2006 08:04pm
Quote (keni @ Tue, May 16 2006, 02:22pm)

kissed with my hands on your hips
Embrace me 'round my waist

the above paragraph doesn't flow very well Imho.

gj


Not at all really sad.gif

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wow good you'll do that all your life and get $$$$ with that tongue.gif


I was going to attempt to publish a book but I ran out of money...who knows maybe I can trade items for someone to pay for it to get published haha.
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#26
May 25 2006 05:39am
Yea, Awesome Poem Man!...I suck at them...But hey...thats just me...Evidentaly Not you!
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