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Aug 5 2007 01:53pm
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Quote (Deviantage @ Thu, Aug 2 2007, 02:04pm)
lol... im speechless... (in a bad way)

haha


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#12
Aug 6 2007 12:38pm
creative... but fucked up lol
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#13
Aug 6 2007 01:24pm
Quote (Enigma_911 @ Thu, Aug 2 2007, 04:17pm)
One summer morning I could hardly wait,
To open up my window and gaze at my estate.

Their was a tiny little sparrow with a tiny little bill,
Pecking at a breadcrumb upon my window sill.

As he hopped a little closer to get a piece of bread,
I quickly SLAMMED the window and chopped off his Fucking head.

Thank-you Thank-you I'll be heere all week.


this is great stuff
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#14
Aug 12 2007 02:11pm
u killed my bird but anyways i am sorry to say that i hated it.
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Aug 16 2007 07:31am
Quote (Enigma_911 @ Thu, Aug 2 2007, 08:17pm)
One summer morning I could hardly wait,
To open up my window and gaze at my estate.

Their was a tiny little sparrow with a tiny little bill,
Pecking at a breadcrumb upon my window sill.

As he hopped a little closer to get a piece of bread,
I quickly SLAMMED the window and chopped off his Fucking head.

Thank-you Thank-you I'll be heere all week.







A bill is actually only on ducks/geese/platypus, sparrows have beaks. lol
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#16
Aug 17 2007 12:38pm
LOL, this poem is just wrong.
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#17
Aug 18 2007 04:18am
Lol that was very funny. I didnt even see it coming really, then I read the last line and died.
Good stuff, good stuff.
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#18
Sep 1 2007 05:26am
Quote (Enigma_911 @ Thu, 2 Aug 2007, 21:17)
One summer morning I could hardly wait,
To open up my window and gaze at my estate.

Their was a tiny little sparrow with a tiny little bill,
Pecking at a breadcrumb upon my window sill.

As he hopped a little closer to get a piece of bread,
I quickly SLAMMED the window and chopped off his Fucking head.

Thank-you Thank-you I'll be heere all week.



HAHA haven't laughed like that for a long time
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#19
Sep 7 2007 03:23am
Quote (Deviantage @ Thu, Aug 2 2007, 10:04pm)
lol... im speechless... (in a bad way)

haha


im in a good way ^^

I liked it 10/10
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#20
Sep 7 2007 01:50pm
nice poem u fin d the exactly words in each verse
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