Quote (Yahooligan @ Wed, May 9 2007, 12:36am)
An amazon is living in a world of dragons and demons walking through the earth and the town the amazon's live in is ransacked by a evil horde and this amazon character fights with honor and she gets captured and the leader of the pack that ransacked the town started falling in love with this amazon prisoner and she starts feeling attracted towards this leader himself but the leaders brother despises this amazon and try's to kill this amazon behind the leaders back but the leader stops him and banish's his brother which then the leaders brother moves around the lands raising an army to go and pillage and eventually a war breaks out between the leader and the leaders brother tribes and many people die and the brothers meet on the battleground and begin to fight then one of the brothers trips and starts falling down a cliff grabbing onto the ledge and the brother stares down at him and see's love in his eyes and goes to save him but he falls and yells no.
make up an ending urself thats all i got.
THIS is the longest sentence I have EVER read!
dude, cut the "and"s and add some commas, punctums(or what its called in english)...
lol!
I guess being in school has addled my brain