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#11
May 3 2007 06:19pm
Quote (drewtx84 @ Sun, Apr 29 2007, 10:08am)
Lawl wow, so people think this poem just sucks. Just to let people know, A POEM DOESN'T NESSESARILY HAVE TO RHYME. RHYMING = More Restriction of words to put in. Thanks


no dude it just straight sucks. theres two lines of like 6 syllables then 4 lines of about 15. and they end in the same word, then back to 6 syylables. your right, poems don't have to ryme. but what makes then GOOD is a good rhyme screme, not-so-deviating syllables in their lines, and more then 8lines. plain sux from me.
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#12
May 4 2007 09:15am
suicide being used 100 times ruined it
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#13
May 5 2007 06:15am
Quote (bongmaker @ Fri, May 4 2007, 12:10am)
Quote (SparK_HaMMaZ @ Mon, Apr 30 2007, 05:47am)
i think isnt bad at all..
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Don't make his head big.. It blows.


kk ty, i'll make sure to get better :\
although i only made this when i was bored didnt' put much thought as to where to place wat words to etc...
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May 5 2007 08:20pm
Quote (drewtx84 @ Sat, May 5 2007, 05:15am)
Quote (bongmaker @ Fri, May 4 2007, 12:10am)
Quote (SparK_HaMMaZ @ Mon, Apr 30 2007, 05:47am)
i think isnt bad at all..
wink.gif


Don't make his head big.. It blows.


kk ty, i'll make sure to get better :\
although i only made this when i was bored didnt' put much thought as to where to place wat words to etc...


well you got all pissed when people didn't like it, my guess is you really did...
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#15
May 6 2007 04:37pm
tell me some1 lives with u and ur under constant watch and all the sharp objects r hidden from ya.

if u were just going around it isn't to bad i'm not big into poems but i didn't mind it just kinda scared for u...
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#16
May 6 2007 06:34pm
i dont like it, try again plz wink.gif
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May 15 2007 02:26pm
Quote (Yahooligan @ Sun, May 6 2007, 10:37pm)
tell me some1 lives with u and ur under constant watch and all the sharp objects r hidden from ya.

if u were just going around it isn't to bad i'm not big into poems but i didn't mind it just kinda scared for u...


as i said i made this in my pleasure time. just thought up of a random topic and this was it....
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#18
May 16 2007 12:46pm
Quote (drewtx84 @ Tue, May 15 2007, 01:26pm)
Quote (Yahooligan @ Sun, May 6 2007, 10:37pm)
tell me some1 lives with u and ur under constant watch and all the sharp objects r hidden from ya.

if u were just going around it isn't to bad i'm not big into poems but i didn't mind it just kinda scared for u...


as i said i made this in my pleasure time. just thought up of a random topic and this was it....


myabe you could put a lil more thought into it next time
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#19
May 18 2007 06:27am
You weren't lying. It's emo as hell.
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#20
May 19 2007 03:05pm
a bit emo, but still alright i guess
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