These are great

thank you so much for reading

Amazing work as usual. Needs to be bumped back to the first page.

No lie really like your stuff

thank you both for reading and bumping

just letting you know, chugging Clorox bleach is a bad idea

but I liked the poetry

Posting just to keep my thread alive, to prevent a repeat of my first attempt.

I'M PERFECT

I’ve found love, at last! This idyllic fantasy factory,
Manufacturing perfection at a fever pace!
An epiphanic divorce from flesh and bone,
Where human contour is worshiped no more,
And we’ve ushered in a new era of obsessive emulation
Wrought with powdered teeth and silicon daydreams.

It would have happened anyway, and sometimes I feel like throwing up.