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Sep 10 2009 07:31am
Quote (Phaladriel @ Thu, Sep 10 2009, 05:18am)
Haha, thats quite funny, it would be realllly bad without the moral ^_^

I like it though :P


Thanks! :)
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Sep 12 2009 08:27pm
So the moral was the only good part of the story?
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Sep 12 2009 10:47pm
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Sep 14 2009 06:53pm
little fish should of sided with the octopus
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Quote (3atsarr0ws @ Tue, Sep 15 2009, 10:53am)
little fish should of sided with the octopus


so true...
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Quote (Hammer_Hdin @ Wed, Sep 2 2009, 06:50am)
And the moral of the story is: Pretend to be nice to your friends, but when you get the chance, abandon them and leave them to die whilst you escape in paradise :P

not funny at the least.

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Quote (Krayze @ Wed, Sep 9 2009, 09:49am)
When I started to read it, I'm like "Okay I'm gunna tell this guy how stupid he rights"

but.. I like it :D Cool story.

The only interesting part was the actual story though. You have to be good with words to keep them entertained through the not so fun parts.


writes. why is he the stupid one?
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Nov 6 2009 05:13am
Quote (Hammer_Hdin @ Sep 2 2009 04:50am)
Hello.
I made up a story it's very short but tell me what you think of it:

There was once a fish who swum across the seas all day and night, happily swimming around and eating food.
Then came the octopus, a big, ferocious creature who threatened to eat the fish.
The fish said "Stop! Don't eat me! I'm too young to die!"
Then the octopus said "I'm not going to eat you... I'm just going to eat your friends. But don't tell them, or I'll have to eat you too!"
The little fish cried and couldn't decide what to do...
Should he tell his friends, or escape with his own life?
He decided to tell his friends and risk getting eaten...
"Watch out! Watch out! An octopus is going to eat you!" yelled the little fish to the rest of the school of fish.
The school of fish panicked and quickly escaped as fast as they could.
"Wait up!" said the little fish, "We can't outrun it! We need a plan!"
"No" said one of the bigger fish, "We already have a plan... we don't need to outrun the octopus, we just need to outrun you!"

And the moral of the story is: Pretend to be nice to your friends, but when you get the chance, abandon them and leave them to die whilst you escape in paradise :P

Let me know what you think of it :)


dout you have any friends so have fun with betraying them
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Nov 13 2009 07:35pm
Quote (ybesomean @ Nov 6 2009 01:13am)
dout you have any friends so have fun with betraying them


thats not nice :bonk:

good story.. reminded me of this cartoon i seen in the newspapper... 2 guys were camping when they saw a bear, and was about to run. then the one guy said wait a minute.. i dont have to out run the bear, i just have to out run you. lol

Moral of the story is: Its a Dog eat Dog World
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