Quote (larry20j @ Wed, Jan 7 2009, 10:01am)

interesting. you need help

Quote (LeGeNDOfLiNK @ Wed, Jan 7 2009, 07:35pm)

This was a disappointing read. Consider the book "An Hero," by Anonymous.

Quote (Methuselah @ Sat, Jan 10 2009, 05:57pm)

There are some interesting lines. This is not new material, however. Teenagers the world over have been writing about their angst forever.

The first one, with the attempted rhyming, is really not very good.

Quote (darcanegel @ Wed, Jan 7 2009, 03:21pm)

they're pretty funny...if you're trying to be ironic they're not bad.

but if that's really how you feel and you're being serious...then

Quote (Plaguefear @ Mon, Jan 12 2009, 09:45pm)

I laugh at any one who tries to label anything like this, it is writing about my own inner demons, emo is an overused term that is used to describe anything dark which is bullshit.
The core of who we are is pain, no one could function without it, stop using petty labels to describe something so vast and difficult to comprehend.

Quote (Diana @ Mon, Jan 19 2009, 05:16pm)

i think it was pretty good