@rew
You'd better not go acting a fag
Cause Rew's got a scary big tag
He'll lock your thread, that's all he can do
Cause he can't think of anything new
I'm talking of rhyming and poetry
I'll tell you what happens when he will see
This post of mine where he got owned
He locks it down to keep his throne
So you'd better be fast if you wanna see
Rew getting owned by little me


@demos
I needn't say much, you've said it all
You'd better pick up your phone for a call
Where to start, I do not know
May I suggest the psychiatric row?
And I just might may add to say
You're lyrics are ten steps below OK

dragon reborn
you smell like a fish
or maybe a pickle
in the little rascals they say "i gotta nickel"
you say my ryhmin in 10 steps below ok?
sorry if i spend all my time on croquet
this form is poetry is rather dull and uninspired
your bland rhymes are all old and tired

Either get inspired, or rewired or plan to get fired
Speaking of others when your odor is quite unbearable
The rhymes you share are beyond terrible
You don't stand a chance
to hold your own in this dance
Your lyrics ring as second rate hysterics
Yet you spout about
Like you offer something better than goo and gout
More posts per day than hours the same way
Yet poking fun about peeps playing croquet
Just because you're getting burnt like an ant from a magnified sun ray.

white your poetry thing really makes no sense
to keep my dog from chasing deer i put up a fence
how am i making fun of people playing croquet?
i drove by this field that had a bunch of hay
how do i spout a disease created by a buildup of uric acid?
i bet right now your penis is limp and flaccid

Why so set on advertising your ignorance
You need to beg repentence
for being so dense
You say my poetry makes no sense
It's just that you can't comprehend
I try not to offend
But what other message can I send
There's no nice way for the words to bend
Before you get a functional brain
I advise your posting to refrain.

why white, you are just so silly
probably wear dresses that are ever so frilly
you rhyming lacks rhythm and flow
so get out of here
go bitch go!

Yo Homo!
I mean Demo,

Who you calling bitch, when I saw you last night
When I pulled it out, eyes open, you shiver'd in fright
White dont wear the dress, but neither do you,
But you took it up the butt...compared to you, girls I met few

So quit playing,
Take those jeans off,
and dress like you should.

Like my bitch.


BAM GUYS, I dont even rhyme alot, my stuff is still sick

I think I crossed the flame line, so sorry demo, i just get so into it sometimes.

no, you're not sick, infact you prolly never will be
on a mic i can sever your skill see
so on a forum i guess it should be quite easy
some of your lines make me quite queezy
you're slightly sleezy and you might be a he-she
you're highly cheasy i wish they had a smiley of jeezy
so i can give you a kinda nice comparison
actually i'll just finda lice experiment
cause you're about as buggy as them so it'd make more sense
then to get you an african-american

frug it ill give it a try, for sight is close
the titans abounding this post, remorse
fear you not the turn of centuries?
where lions and hawks bandy gently
let yourself go, release it twice twain
but not bullets for wisdom's shame..
whence are you grown tall or commercial?
have you biceps or pecs or not offal?
a coup de grace i stay steadily
i havent yet met your mother regrettably
for once i have i'll beg repent
the sword we raise become pens
and with it i write you a burning cigarette
a momentary sin that u'll wish to reset

rew, the funeral of dearly fear
let us transpose like few two rear