saying that "some of these are lyrics" is the ultimate cop out
i say that too lol

i enjoyed the first half of sounds perfect, appreciated the asterix of the title

typically more structured, rhyming ones with a defined (or flexable) meter
i dont like many free verse, so i know im alot more harsh when i read them, but i DO like some free verse poems. however these... i just dont like; again much of it is the distain for free verse, so dont take it personally when i of all people dont like them

Nice job