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Apr 24 2008 05:48pm
Quote (Essence_Active @ Sat, Apr 19 2008, 12:00pm)
perseverance will guide my way
the curvy path leads me towards the bright shining light
one day it will finally be achieved
certain goals seem so far out of sight
i turn loose my own mind and think to myself
unfulfilled and unsatisfied, i walk alone
through the depths of hell, i strive for inner peace
your gentle touch and soft hand will be my shield
an unneccessary fight, to my lover i will yield
together, yet so far apart
were torn to pieces, my heart now filled with anxiety.
fake songs with real pain we listen.
i look into your eyes and see your face
lonely and decrepit, the silence only makes it worse
please bless me oh lord, show me your sweet grace
this walk alone will end for me today
because no longer awake, i lay.


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Apr 25 2008 12:29am
even wiki hates free verse

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Apr 25 2008 05:04pm
Quote (Mr_Bilson @ Thu, Apr 24 2008, 11:29pm)
even wiki hates free verse

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you prolly changed it lmao
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Apr 26 2008 12:08am
Quote (Kamikizzle @ Sat, Apr 26 2008, 12:04pm)
you prolly changed it lmao


i didnt it was there when i looked it up ^^

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Apr 27 2008 12:18am
lacks imagery.
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