"Reality" or "Fanatasy"

The continual progression through life leaves one a quizzicle inquisitor, pondering whether their life presents any meaning, whether their existance and the fact that they subsist consitutes anything beyond the fact that they are alive, are they alive?, what is reality?, what is fantasy?, can reality be what others see as fantasy or is there a deeper meaning, can one tell me the reason for my existance?, or am I to believe that GOD has placed an imperfect creature apon the earth to quest for confirmation of his own existence, the thoughts of reality blur the nebulous that is fantasy, "reality" the state of being or the state of nothingness, "fantasy" being my pondered realms and worlds, but who pondered reality? and who created the person that pondered this "reality" that I live in, the question only poses an infinite loop of creation that proves to go nowhere and presents nothing that was previously unknown, the quest for answers baffles even the most ingenious, so you tell me who is to tell me that reality isnt someone's fantasy?

very interesting poem, well written

you should try and get published IMHO

that's deep shit

Very nice poem. Kinda makes me want to get into an existentialist debate with someone Well done.

Lol very nice, very nice.
It really makes you think, which so did R.A. Salvatores writing about Life and Death in "The Halfling's Gem" when Drizzt was talking about life, and death.
Very VERY nice.

you got a weird imagination

There isn't really much depth to it - no solid idea or conclusion... An every day thought and fancy wordplay... hardly "deep". With such matters it's hard to portray your own ideals clearly in any medium, so I'd suggest that continuation and expansion on a similar theme would be a good idea. Just write any thoughts and progress from each - forget about concentrating on the linguistics for the moment, once you have clear and innovative ideas, you can rewrite. This is just how it comes across to me.
You obviously have a talent for writing, keep it up.

This post was edited by ains on Aug 24 2007 07:04am

i almost got a shiver up my spine like i did when i was readin Maelstrom by Edgar A. Poe .. keep it up and try publisihing it somewhere or blog it for future...

Well , good poem maybe you should consider publishing it .

Very nice yo

Right more you could sell that or make Cards for HallMarks