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May 31 2013 01:56pm
Ok guys. So I told you that I´ve had time for a real shooting this week, for the first time since months. I actually wanted to wait until I´m done with the whole set, but I´m not sure when I can finish it, so I figured I´d show the first 3 collages. I had alot of fun and I hope you like what you see! Have a nice weekend!






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May 31 2013 02:20pm
why is she so angry at me? what did i do? :cry:

is it just me or do these images look a bit "washed-out?" like someone dialed low on the saturation scale or something? idk how to describe to look actually...
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May 31 2013 04:46pm
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why is she so angry at me? what did i do?  :cry:

is it just me or do these images look a bit "washed-out?" like someone dialed low on the saturation scale or something? idk how to describe to look actually...


yeah i dont like how they look either, not exactly why she has weird expressions. i dont think the model nor the editing looks good.

not saying i could do better but these just look plain bleh
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May 31 2013 07:31pm
She's a beautiful girl, don't get me wrong.. But she's trying WAY to hard, and wearing way to much makeup. On a positive note, your use of light is fantastic. What's your setup?
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May 31 2013 08:33pm
the lighting for the last two are really nice,the left eye is bugging me a little bit though.
the middle two are kind of plain, i wish you shot it in 1:2 ratio or triangle lighting to make it more interesting.
the dress color is a bit weird for me, maybe its the editing choice, and a bit too dark there is no detail aside from the seems.



This post was edited by LION on May 31 2013 08:35pm
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Jun 1 2013 03:45pm
me no like her eyelashes
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Jun 1 2013 11:24pm
the photos are not bad.. but the model looks kinda fake.. she is trying too much to post. however i dont like the postediting..i feel like somebody dropped smth purple in my eyes
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Jun 2 2013 09:30am
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her eyes are scary esp in the right one,

she doesnt know what to do with her mouth

her pose, what is that

the fingernails look bad.



bro i know you think these are good but D: they dont look great at all
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Jun 2 2013 10:29am
Shots aren't bad mate!

Just a few things..

I think you should lose the diffusers and try working with hard light and use a softbox with -1 / -2 stops off key for fill. Harder like will create harder shadows.. in turn making her naturally slimmer.

Also try getting on your knees, shooting up with 50/85 filling the frame with her, will create a different perspective rather than straight on. Also, nothing wrong with using negative space for framing.

But in all honesty, I just want to say one thing, and I apologise if I offend anyone, but I think she'sa little fat for a model and you need to work that liquify tool a lot more, mostly around her face.

This post was edited by lithfkn on Jun 2 2013 10:30am
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