Ok guys. So I told you that I´ve had time for a real shooting this week, for the first time since months. I actually wanted to wait until I´m done with the whole set, but I´m not sure when I can finish it, so I figured I´d show the first 3 collages. I had alot of fun and I hope you like what you see! Have a nice weekend!

why is she so angry at me? what did i do?

is it just me or do these images look a bit "washed-out?" like someone dialed low on the saturation scale or something? idk how to describe to look actually...

yeah i dont like how they look either, not exactly why she has weird expressions. i dont think the model nor the editing looks good.

not saying i could do better but these just look plain bleh

She's a beautiful girl, don't get me wrong.. But she's trying WAY to hard, and wearing way to much makeup. On a positive note, your use of light is fantastic. What's your setup?

the lighting for the last two are really nice,the left eye is bugging me a little bit though.
the middle two are kind of plain, i wish you shot it in 1:2 ratio or triangle lighting to make it more interesting.
the dress color is a bit weird for me, maybe its the editing choice, and a bit too dark there is no detail aside from the seems.



This post was edited by LION on May 31 2013 08:35pm

me no like her eyelashes

the photos are not bad.. but the model looks kinda fake.. she is trying too much to post. however i dont like the postediting..i feel like somebody dropped smth purple in my eyes

her eyes are scary esp in the right one,

she doesnt know what to do with her mouth

her pose, what is that

the fingernails look bad.



bro i know you think these are good but D: they dont look great at all

Shots aren't bad mate!

Just a few things..

I think you should lose the diffusers and try working with hard light and use a softbox with -1 / -2 stops off key for fill. Harder like will create harder shadows.. in turn making her naturally slimmer.

Also try getting on your knees, shooting up with 50/85 filling the frame with her, will create a different perspective rather than straight on. Also, nothing wrong with using negative space for framing.

But in all honesty, I just want to say one thing, and I apologise if I offend anyone, but I think she'sa little fat for a model and you need to work that liquify tool a lot more, mostly around her face.

This post was edited by lithfkn on Jun 2 2013 10:30am