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Sep 23 2011 03:41pm
First off, this is my first time doing any kind of "serious" portrait photography. This is also the first time I've ever used any kind of lighting other than natural sunlight. I'm somewhat desperate for advice and possibly tutorials on studio portrait photography.

In my photography fundamentals class, we were allowed to use 3 different studio lights that our teacher brought in as well as pick a partner to shoot. This is my new friend Tino. I used one light that was low to the ground to try and really accentuate his face. PLEASE critique this! (PS, the large black area is his shoulder)

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Sep 23 2011 04:23pm
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First off, this is my first time doing any kind of "serious" portrait photography. This is also the first time I've ever used any kind of lighting other than natural sunlight. I'm somewhat desperate for advice and possibly tutorials on studio portrait photography.

In my photography fundamentals class, we were allowed to use 3 different studio lights that our teacher brought in as well as pick a partner to shoot. This is my new friend Tino. I used one light that was low to the ground to try and really accentuate his face. PLEASE critique this! (PS, the large black area is his shoulder)

http://img823.imageshack.us/img823/2297/tino4crop.jpg


The way you shot this makes him loook creepy. lightaimed from below does this.
most portraits need a bette front-to-side face ratio. usually 3/4. yours is like 7/8.
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Sep 23 2011 06:45pm
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The way you shot this makes him loook creepy. lightaimed from below does this.
most portraits need a bette front-to-side face ratio. usually 3/4. yours is like 7/8.


I was definitely going for a "semi-badass" look. But ya I agree that this angle is probably too flat.
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Sep 24 2011 08:59am
any comments on the pp?
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Sep 24 2011 10:53am
Quote (bygdubdiesel @ Sep 24 2011 04:59pm)
any comments on the pp?


doesnt even look like pp much, just yellow, go bw ;)
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Sep 24 2011 11:19am
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doesnt even look like pp much, just yellow, go bw ;)


Guess my PP looks pretty natural lol. Good. And naw on BW, I always do BW.

Here's the original.

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Sep 24 2011 06:48pm
You guys suck
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Sep 24 2011 08:57pm
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You guys suck


dude all you really did was increase either blacks/contrast. the yellow looks ugly. the composition is bad. there is nothing 'deep' or solemn portrayed in this picture. it really is boring.
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Sep 24 2011 09:25pm
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dude all you really did was increase either blacks/contrast. the yellow looks ugly. the composition is bad. there is nothing 'deep' or solemn portrayed in this picture. it really is boring.


I know your brothers up your ass and all, but can you not be a dick for a second?

I appreciated your original feedback but that was unnecessary. If you wanna post something that would actually help me, feel free.
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Sep 24 2011 09:41pm
Quote (bygdubdiesel @ Sep 24 2011 08:25pm)
I know your brothers up your ass and all, but can you not be a dick for a second?

I appreciated your original feedback but that was unnecessary. If you wanna post something that would actually help me, feel free.


That was hardly being a dick... Honest =\= dick. He didn't even say that the photo sucks. Don't ask for a critique if you can't take honesty. You want a dick response, I'm sure Sal would be more than willing to come up with one. Omar is one of the most knowledgable and helpful on this forum.

This post was edited by CitizenScuba on Sep 24 2011 09:42pm
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