Looking for some feedback, I have a female photographer friend who I hang out with a lot and she invited me out to one of her shoots so I could learn a little bit more about posing models and working with people. I do a lot more nature and car related stuff. The decal/watermark is a joke because someone was complaining about how the primary photographers shoots looked unprofessional because she moved her's around alot, so please ingore :).



350 Z



Evo



300 Z (She approved photo lol)



Photographer and Model

They are both wanting me to come out again and take possibly a more active role in future shoots, so looking for some feedback on what I can work on. These are pretty much unedited, as I have yet to develop an editing style.

They do look very unprofessional as a matter of fact, if you ask for my humble opinion.
The white car is scratched, the model looks like a high maintenance slut, and the background looks like an abandonned farm land.
Nothing fits.
As far as photography is concerned, I see nothing interesting.
Maybe if I was a guy I could like this and say 'oh man I'd do her'.
But as a female photographer, there is nothing to appreciate here.

Had a long drive and the kids were a pain in the butt on the way back... sorry for lack of finesse in my comment.

I completely agree 90% of what you said. My problem is I don't even know where to start on working on improving it since I don't really know anything about doing this kind of stuff. I felt like it was kind of hard and inappropriate to go in and redirect someone else's shoot though. I mean I can clean the car up in photoshop not that much of a problem, but I felt to stay out everyone way I couldn't get the shots/angles I wanted and it came off very just like point and shootish.

I appreciate the honest MotherOfTwo.

she has a cute behind.

This post was edited by lithfkn on Aug 7 2011 06:05pm

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a donk?

i vouch ^^

I would fuck the blonde

I would work on lighting and fill light. A reflector would make a world of difference.