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May 6 2011 04:22am
Hey guys

Last day i got a new cam after quite alot of consideration picking the right one. The added a filter to the following photo in Adobe Lightroom -> what you think? youre more than welcome to give a shot at any improvements i could do.

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May 6 2011 07:17am
It's quite a nice silhouette. But the fact that your main subject is in the center of the frame takes away a lot of thrill from the picture.
Maybe you should try cropping it a bit and also lose some of that vignetting effect!
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May 6 2011 02:56pm
yah the center of the picture is very stable and predicatble for your subject to be which takes alot of appeal from the picture. Try rule of thirds i love. Divide your picture into thirds and where the two division lays, thats where your subject should be.
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May 6 2011 03:11pm
google rule of thirds
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May 6 2011 03:13pm
Show us org shot
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May 6 2011 03:53pm
Thanks for the tip with rule of thirds ill try to follow that on my next shot.

Panam - i'll upload the org. shot tomorow


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