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Apr 17 2011 12:41pm
I haven't posted photos recently. Here's a few:

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Apr 17 2011 12:46pm
great shots, wish i could 2nd shoot with you
there is so much i need to learn
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Apr 17 2011 12:48pm
Good shots but im missing something, dunno what it is tho :)

Leave boobs alone you little perv :D


and that one on the left it's my fav !

good work mate
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Apr 17 2011 12:51pm
Quote (PANAM @ 17 Apr 2011 22:48)
Good shots but im missing something, dunno what it is tho :)

Leave boobs alone you little perv :D
http://i364.photobucket.com/albums/oo85/LeonLeon123/DA-3.jpg

and that one on the left it's my fav !

good work mate


oddly that was my least fav shot, it is noticeably posed and looks unnatural
i think it would've been better with elbows bent and hands closer to their shoulders
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Apr 17 2011 12:54pm
Quote (PANAM @ Apr 17 2011 11:48am)
Good shots but im missing something, dunno what it is tho :)

Leave boobs alone you little perv :Dhttp://i364.photobucket.com/albums/oo85/LeonLeon123/DA-3.jpg

and that one on the left it's my fav !

good work mate


LOL. He wasn't grabbing her boobs, but oh my gosh, I didn't notice that :(
It's just a few photos. If you can guide yourself to my site, you can find more. I can't post link here though :(

Quote (jayandnix @ Apr 17 2011 11:46am)
great shots, wish i could 2nd shoot with you
there is so much i need to learn


TY for the compliment. Means a lot to me.

This post was edited by onepagememory on Apr 17 2011 12:56pm
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Apr 17 2011 01:20pm
Lovely shots mang. I like the sequencing on #4.

I love the foreground bokeh on #7.

The only shots i dislike is #6. The left side seems like a compromise between a silhouette. The blue burst seems odd (at least to me). The first word that popped into my mind on the right photo was "stone". :o

But great job mang. Did you take these at a bontanical garden?
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Apr 17 2011 01:28pm
Quote (Eek @ Apr 17 2011 12:20pm)
Lovely shots mang. I like the sequencing on #4.

I love the foreground bokeh on #7.

The only shots i dislike is #6. The left side seems like a compromise between a silhouette. The blue burst seems odd (at least to me). The first word that popped into my mind on the right photo was "stone". :o

But great job mang. Did you take these at a bontanical garden?


These were taken at a city park called the 'rose gardens.' It's ~2 acres of 95% roses, 3% paths, and 2% benches/stones. There's also a waterfall (but we skipped because it was mosquito-ridden), and a whole bunch of other neat props. It's the ONLY nice place to take photos, other than downtown / epic sunset spots.

Does this look better?



This post was edited by onepagememory on Apr 17 2011 01:28pm
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Apr 17 2011 01:30pm
Quote (jayandnix @ Apr 17 2011 02:46pm)
great shots, wish i could 2nd shoot with you
there is so much i need to learn


I call shotgun! I need field experience :P

Quote (onepagememory @ Apr 17 2011 03:28pm)
These were taken at a city park called the 'rose gardens.' It's ~2 acres of 95% roses, 3% paths, and 2% benches/stones. There's also a waterfall (but we skipped because it was mosquito-ridden), and a whole bunch of other neat props. It's the ONLY nice place to take photos, other than downtown / epic sunset spots.


Bug off to the rescue! :lol:

I'm sure there are other parts of your city to take photos man! Get off your lazy butt and go scout :bonk:
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Apr 17 2011 01:32pm
Quote (onepagememory @ Apr 17 2011 03:28pm)
These were taken at a city park called the 'rose gardens.' It's ~2 acres of 95% roses, 3% paths, and 2% benches/stones. There's also a waterfall (but we skipped because it was mosquito-ridden), and a whole bunch of other neat props. It's the ONLY nice place to take photos, other than downtown / epic sunset spots.

Does this look better?

http://i364.photobucket.com/albums/oo85/LeonLeon123/IMG_6764.jpg


Oddly enough, losing detail makes the photo look better. The last version just looks seriously underexposed.

One thing you need to fix though. The blue rim light around them when the bg directly behind them is white.

EDIT: Also the massive CA around the bushes.

This post was edited by Eek on Apr 17 2011 01:33pm
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Apr 17 2011 02:51pm
Quote (Eek @ Apr 17 2011 12:32pm)
Oddly enough, losing detail makes the photo look better. The last version just looks seriously underexposed.

One thing you need to fix though. The blue rim light around them when the bg directly behind them is white.

EDIT: Also the massive CA around the bushes.


Pshh maybe later. Editing these photos is boring, but thanks for the tips.

Quote (Eek @ Apr 17 2011 12:30pm)
I call shotgun! I need field experience :P



Bug off to the rescue! :lol:

I'm sure there are other parts of your city to take photos man! Get off your lazy butt and go scout :bonk:


I've lived here all my live, and know ~15 places worthy of taking photos. The problem is that this city is so backwards, my ideas are too NY or South Cali to be popular yet.
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