The Autumns Sign - Topic

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Dec 19 2010 04:51pm

@School.
We got homework to capture photo, the theme was "Autumns Sign".
I did make such as "Fallen mermaid of the autumn".
Enjoy.

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Thanks to the workteam and model for helping me to do dress, this couldn't become true without you.

This post was edited by JJYRQI on Dec 19 2010 04:53pm

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Dec 19 2010 09:02pm

Quote (JJYRQI @ Dec 19 2010 03:51pm)

@School.
We got homework to capture photo, the theme was "Autumns Sign".
I did make such as "Fallen mermaid of the autumn".
Enjoy.

http://farm2.static.flickr.com/1237/5164394798_c1d00c8aea_z.jpg

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http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4147/5164399482_9604cc120d_z.jpg

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Photographing, editing and designing (c) Me.
Thanks to the workteam and model for helping me to do dress, this couldn't become true without you.

Looks underage o.O
I really think selective coloring is poorly used in this image. I'd do editing similar to #2. The cold tones make it very legend-y. Fix the overexposure on the face, however. I'd just saturate the whole thing a bit more so that her skin looks more natural.

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Dec 20 2010 06:16am

Quote (onepagememory @ Dec 20 2010 06:02am)

She is over 21.
The face is not over exposured, are you sure your display is calibrated? Yah, its true that the selective colour doesnt work here.
Thanks for comment.

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Dec 20 2010 07:24am

prefer the 1st image
and agree that the 2nd pic is slightly overexposed on the face

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