next one sesion, C&C pls

all photos taken by canon 50d + 50mm 1.8 + 430ex II

i know im amateur

Tinka:

Your posing is decent. Composition 8/10. The lighting you used seems like window light to the left, or perhaps 2 strobes from afar, which is normally a good setup, but is very unflattering to the model. Most of these shots are underexposed for my taste. The focus is off on some, such as #6. Imo, unless you're trying an artistic effect, it is less productive to have such a small aperture and only have 1 eye focused. You kept doing a post processed vignette effect, which was unflattering in some pictures such as #5 where most of her face is covered in this vignette. Shooting from above made her nose look big (#1,2, and the last one just a bit). Good shot! Keep up the good work!

big thx

good shots, onepage said most already
i would just stress that the DOF needs to be a bit bigger

They are all identical to each other imo

I really like the looks of the eyes in #2.
I don't know why you have put together 2 of the images, seems rather random.

Overall they look really good. Any photoediting done?

im using photoshop