I love this girl's eyes =) you guys know what to do I hope. I'll post the one where you can see her eyes tomorrow though... I can't find it all of a sudden!

Remember I don't mind harsh comments. I need them sometimes!



edit: hmmm It looks slightly different uploaded this time... like it lost a little quality somewhere. Any ideas as to why?

This post was edited by irdesi on Jul 1 2010 12:08am

this is what I was talking about; look at those eyes! It's like the world reflects off them so beautifully =)





And I like this one much better in black and white



and for this last one I'd like you to tell me if you see anything strange I do but I love it



Don't forget to comment with constructive criticism please because I'd love to take even better pictures of this gorgeous baby!

This post was edited by irdesi on Jul 1 2010 09:52am

here's another one

what's wrong with the colors!!! they look really different even when I look at them with windows picture viewer :/

for the last one, the strange thing is the blanket behind the kid's head has no pattern! random blue and green and white circles! what was whoever made it thinking?!!?!?1

and now for seriousness

for the first one the thing in the lower right corner is really distracting

third one is my favorite:D

and with the last one i think the bottom is distracting maybe try cropping it out or try a different angle =X

baby is cute. pictures aren't.

good point. I'll see what I can do =)

good try for the strange thing on the last one but that's not it thanks for trying =)

do you mind giving me more than that please? if you don't like them please tell me what you don't like so I can take a better one. Thanks =)

This post was edited by irdesi on Jul 1 2010 03:24pm

Twice the baby's head is cut off; doing so, in this case, does not add an aesthetic benefit, so even claiming an exotic sort of composition doesn't work for me.
White balance is off: in some, its inclined to yellow. In the others, it's inclined to blue. Only in the first image is the white balance profitable.
One image is slightly out of focus.

GJ on the b/w post editing though. It's not excessively contrasted, which prints nicer.
Your composition looks a bit off. On the portrait-like shots, it's not your fault; the baby have deformed proportions, after all.

thank you hmmm... I wish you could see them the way I do on my monitor :/ I did mention that the colors look slightly off but thank you! I'll definitely keep that in mind =) I need to figure out how to fix the white balance for these kinds of pictures but it's my first time photographing humans so I'll have plenty of errors before I figure it out. Which photos have the off composition?

oh and thank you for the compliment on the BW!