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May 3 2010 03:01am
I always love some comments, critiques also welcome ofc :)













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May 3 2010 07:28am
Only critique I really have is for the 3rd. That shot would have been a lot nicer had you moved enough to the point where those shadows were out of the shot. It really seems that you could have walked forward and slightly to the right, then you could have shot at a wider focal length to still get a similar perspective without the distracting shadows.
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May 3 2010 07:59am
Quote (CitizenScuba @ 3 May 2010 15:28)
Only critique I really have is for the 3rd. That shot would have been a lot nicer had you moved enough to the point where those shadows were out of the shot. It really seems that you could have walked forward and slightly to the right, then you could have shot at a wider focal length to still get a similar perspective without the distracting shadows.


I cant go wider then 18 mm though :p
Still, dont you think the shadows reveal more about the surroundings the picture would do without them? I should have made a shot without them so i could compare :)
Thanks for the input

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#4
May 3 2010 08:59am
I agree with hest, I think the shadows add more realism and depth to the picture. It is a neat idea!
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May 3 2010 11:05am
Quote (hestJaevel @ May 3 2010 02:01am)
I always love some comments, critiques also welcome ofc :)

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Composition on #1 is bad, the only original and creative shot is 5 but it could have been composed in a much better way.
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#6
May 3 2010 12:35pm
I love the composition on #5. Would be really sweet if it wasn't for that small hump on the left above the barb wire.
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#7
May 3 2010 12:58pm
i like them :)
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#8
May 3 2010 04:20pm
very beautiful ^_^
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#9
May 3 2010 05:10pm
Quote (Eek @ May 3 2010 11:35am)
I love the composition on #5. Would be really sweet if it wasn't for that small hump on the left above the barb wire.


Don't you contradict me sir!
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#10
May 3 2010 05:21pm
Quote (the.ice @ 3 May 2010 16:59)
I agree with hest, I think the shadows add more realism and depth to the picture. It is a neat idea!


:)

Quote (onepagememory @ 3 May 2010 19:05)
Composition on #1 is bad, the only original and creative shot is 5 but it could have been composed in a much better way.


Could you please evolve your thoughts? A strictly negative post is of no help for me.

Quote (Eek @ 3 May 2010 20:35)
I love the composition on #5. Would be really sweet if it wasn't for that small hump on the left above the barb wire.


Thank you :)

Quote (rumpali @ 3 May 2010 20:58)
i like them :)


:)

Quote (xbaun @ 4 May 2010 00:20)
very beautiful ^_^


:)
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