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May 1 2010 08:46pm
Well this is the day after I got my first car as a birthday gift from my father. I drove it up on the top of another mountain near my grandparents house, this is about the only photo I liked at all, I did some editing.

C&C would be greatly appreciated. :D




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May 1 2010 09:01pm
shadows is to dark dawg. u need a fill flash left of camera. also, massive lense flare

This post was edited by SaltheSalmon on May 1 2010 09:01pm
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May 1 2010 09:02pm
Quote (SaltheSalmon @ May 1 2010 10:01pm)
shadows is to dark dawg. u need a fill flash left of camera. also, massive lense flare


Idea of the whole photo was a silhouette, your suggestion just completely ruined that.
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May 1 2010 09:06pm
Quote (kratos @ May 1 2010 07:02pm)
Idea of the whole photo was a silhouette, your suggestion just completely ruined that.


well i dont think its very good. the ground looks like shit and where i want to see the car it is to dark to see it + a massive distracting lense flare.

also the frame is balanced very heavy to the left.
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May 1 2010 09:19pm
Quote (SaltheSalmon @ May 1 2010 10:06pm)
well i dont think its very good. the ground looks like shit and where i want to see the car it is to dark to see it + a massive distracting lense flare.

also the frame is balanced very heavy to the left.


Well forget it, tis not important enough for me to care, as if I ever would get anywhere with it.
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May 1 2010 09:28pm
Quote (kratos @ May 1 2010 07:19pm)
Well forget it, tis not important enough for me to care, as if I ever would get anywhere with it.


damn u ask for c&c but really u just wanted jsp to stroke ur dick?
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May 1 2010 09:30pm
I miss the old days, it's such a shame. This can be closed now.
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May 1 2010 09:31pm
I like the lighting effect. But the spot on the ground is drawing my attention though.

Nice RX8 btw ;)
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May 2 2010 05:16am
where are the pics?
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May 2 2010 06:25am
Quote (lithfkn @ May 2 2010 06:16am)
where are the pics?


Accidentally deleted it off of my Flickr account. O.o

And since I couldn't edit the post I just said to close the topic.
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