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Apr 13 2010 03:18pm
Hope you enjoy.
Please criticize, just don't rage or flame. Thx.


My step-mom's courtyard at night.. beautiful.
:)
Well, the lamp post is.


And another. :)


Beautiful sight. :)


My first bird picture ever! :D And I forgot the Rule of Thirds.. fail.


From second story :).


Didn't forget it this time! (In a moving car at around 60 MPH :P)

/e Probably some of my more boring, amateur pictures.

This post was edited by JizzInMyPants on Apr 13 2010 03:18pm
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Apr 13 2010 03:50pm
So you asked for critic you get it ;)..


The first 3 night shoots, lower the ISO too ~200, use a tripod! Especially the first one tilts over to the right side.

The bird picture, well, the rule of third is bullshit, ofc, there are a lot of pictures looking great if you use it, but using it wont make a picture a good picture .. so even if you made the bird by 1/3 it won´t be that great..
The colors aren´t that bright and theres more cage then bird.

The Garden one what was your focus? What have you want too show us? The blue balloon? The Garden in general? The white flowers in the foreground?

The last one, well again what would you like too show us? Out of a driving car nothing to be proud of in my opinion :(.


Nothing against you or your pictures, maybe they mean something special too you, but we don´t know.
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Apr 13 2010 04:21pm
Courtyard shots are very nice, I like the atmosphere but maybe a bit brighter would be better?

You should try to take the bird out of the cage :lol:
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Apr 13 2010 05:24pm
Quote (Xandriia @ Apr 13 2010 06:21pm)
Courtyard shots are very nice, I like the atmosphere but maybe a bit brighter would be better?

You should try to take the bird out of the cage :lol:


I was scurrrrrred, :P.
Quote (dab @ Apr 13 2010 05:50pm)
So you asked for critic you get it ;)..


The first 3 night shoots, lower the ISO too ~200, use a tripod! Especially the first one tilts over to the right side.

The bird picture, well, the rule of third is bullshit, ofc, there are a lot of pictures looking great if you use it, but using it wont make a picture a good picture .. so even if you made the bird by 1/3 it won´t be that great..
The colors aren´t that bright and theres more cage then bird.

The Garden one what was your focus? What have you want too show us? The blue balloon? The Garden in general? The white flowers in the foreground?

The last one, well again what would you like too show us? Out of a driving car nothing to be proud of in my opinion :(.


Nothing against you or your pictures, maybe they mean something special too you, but we don´t know.


Tripod comment - I know! I was taking pics with my step-bro and I was like, "DAMMIT!"
I just liked the placement of when in a driving car, and the lights were on in the pic of the bird. Didn't look like it, I know. Lol.
Quote (Xandriia @ Apr 13 2010 06:21pm)
Courtyard shots are very nice, I like the atmosphere but maybe a bit brighter would be better?

You should try to take the bird out of the cage :lol:


I was scurrrrrred, :P.
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Apr 13 2010 05:26pm
Quote (dab @ Apr 13 2010 05:50pm)
So you asked for critic you get it ;)..


The first 3 night shoots, lower the ISO too ~200, use a tripod! Especially the first one tilts over to the right side.

The bird picture, well, the rule of third is bullshit, ofc, there are a lot of pictures looking great if you use it, but using it wont make a picture a good picture .. so even if you made the bird by 1/3 it won´t be that great..
The colors aren´t that bright and theres more cage then bird.

The Garden one what was your focus? What have you want too show us? The blue balloon? The Garden in general? The white flowers in the foreground?

The last one, well again what would you like too show us? Out of a driving car nothing to be proud of in my opinion :(.


Nothing against you or your pictures, maybe they mean something special too you, but we don´t know.


Questions..
How do I make a focus from a distance? Idk how to?
Idk if you can, so I always have trouble with that. :/
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Apr 13 2010 06:58pm
Not sure what you need? Focus from a distance? Focal length? O_o Have a Picture were you can show your problem?
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Apr 14 2010 03:11pm
Quote (dab @ Apr 13 2010 08:58pm)
Not sure what you need? Focus from a distance? Focal length? O_o Have a Picture were you can show your problem?


The one with the balloon for a example.
There's really no focus. :/
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Apr 16 2010 01:21am
nice yard.
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Apr 16 2010 01:22am
woah i like your yard [:
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