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Apr 5 2010 06:25am
Hi,
at the beginning I wanted to present, I'm Luke,
Taking pictures for a relatively short time because less than a few months.

Equipment for the photograph:
Canon 400d
50mm 1.8
18-55 kit

mainly deals with photographing models.
I plan to buy a new lens, what a question?

Here are some examples of my photos:















What do you think about them?
on what I should do some work?

This post was edited by Procent on Apr 5 2010 06:26am
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Apr 5 2010 06:40am
Just started in photography and making model photography?
imo start learning the basics or light and everything else..
You are not showing that woman at her best...
Others can tell you more specific things to work on...
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Apr 5 2010 06:49am
Lest there be not only photograph models.
But somehow models photo makes me the most fun
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Apr 5 2010 09:37am
I could not agree more with MotherOfTwo!

Instead of buying a new lens, you should buy a (extern) flash; the light is one of the most importing things, when you're dealing with models..
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Apr 5 2010 02:12pm
I know, I'm wondering about an external flash but not too much to know them.
May instruct you something to Canon for a reasonable price?
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Apr 5 2010 09:14pm
Work on your composition. Can't Stress that enough.

Try learning with things other than a "model", and use your f1.4 lens until you really get the hang of composition and framing. Until you learn this, don't spend the money on a new lens, a Flash would be a very good investment. a Canon SB-600 would suit you very well...great flash.

Also, work on your focusing and Depth of field. And PLEASE fix your ISO, there is sooo much noise in nearly all of those pictures.

Good luck.
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Apr 5 2010 09:27pm
I don't know if it's just me, but I think you need to be careful in your choice of where you focus! It seems either blurry or focused in the wrong spot. I know it's tough, keep it up and keep taking those photos! :P
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Apr 5 2010 09:30pm
Quote (Chantal7 @ Apr 5 2010 10:27pm)
I don't know if it's just me, but I think you need to be careful in your choice of where you focus! It seems either blurry or focused in the wrong spot. I know it's tough, keep it up and keep taking those photos! :P


totally agree..
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Apr 9 2010 02:52pm
Quote (MotherOfTwo @ Apr 5 2010 04:40am)
Just started in photography and making model photography?
imo start learning the basics or light and everything else..
You are not showing that woman at her best...
Others can tell you more specific things to work on...


yea
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