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Nov 4 2009 02:30pm
Here is the final version which i will be entering into the competition 'the unwelcome guest'

i hope all the comments are positive :)

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Nov 4 2009 02:44pm
I'm not entirely convinced to be brutally honest, I think the fact that the rabbit and the fence are essentially the same colour is quite distracting, and the focus and composition doesn't look quite right.
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Nov 4 2009 02:53pm
Quote (doyleo @ Nov 4 2009 01:30pm)
Here is the final version which i will be entering into the competition 'the unwelcome guest'

i hope all the comments are positive :)

http://i417.photobucket.com/albums/pp255/doylEOS/IMG_0032.jpg


If your goal was to let us know that the fence is all that keeps that poor bunny from being eaten - then its great to submit. Color may dock some points off though. Photographing wild animals > events in difficulty. Damn things just wont' stay still!
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Nov 4 2009 03:02pm
Quote (onepagememory @ Nov 4 2009 09:53pm)
If your goal was to let us know that the fence is all that keeps that poor bunny from being eaten - then its great to submit. Color may dock some points off though. Photographing wild animals > events in difficulty. Damn things just wont' stay still!


i was lucky that ma dog was moving as slow as it was!
what changes to colour would you make, ive lowered the saturation as i think it gives the best feel


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I'm not entirely convinced to be brutally honest, I think the fact that the rabbit and the fence are essentially the same colour is quite distracting, and the focus and composition doesn't look quite right.


well i could change the colour of the rabbit! but im not going to...

unfortunatly composition and stuff like that cant be fixed :(
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Nov 4 2009 03:04pm
I say keep the first one, this is too blurred
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Nov 4 2009 03:28pm
Quote (GfxSamurai @ Nov 4 2009 10:04pm)
I say keep the first one, this is too blurred


yeah coz i blurred it you think i should have it sharper?
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Nov 4 2009 03:45pm
Quote (doyleo @ Nov 4 2009 02:28pm)
yeah coz i blurred it you think i should have it sharper?


Yes. If you're going to submit it in a competition of some sort, I suggest you make it black & white. Sharpening and contrast increments will not affect it as much.
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Nov 5 2009 01:21pm
Quote (Veilside @ Nov 4 2009 03:44pm)
I'm not entirely convinced to be brutally honest, I think the fact that the rabbit and the fence are essentially the same colour is quite distracting, and the focus and composition doesn't look quite right.


this
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Nov 6 2009 06:18am
I like the final result. :)
Great DOF, and I like the fence separating the dog and the rabbit. I really see the action!

One of the best photos I have seen in the last few months.
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Nov 6 2009 10:20am
thanks everyone, very much!
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