Quote (TheBlackRose66 @ Sun, Jul 12 2009, 06:33am)
How about you leave this section you fucking asshole if all you're going to comment on is the actual graffiti, and especially say something bad about it.
It's ART, there is no right, or wrong way. It's the artists eyes, they do what they want.
I just realized you're the poster who posted all his work that was pretty good. Now, did anybody comment there and tell you any of it was WRONG, or tell you to learn photography the "right" way?? C'mon, I was really
expecting more from you. We gave you a great welcome into our small community and now you make posts like this on long time posters and people we all really like? I'm disappointed. Just because we said your first posted
photos are great doesn't mean you have to become a egotistical snob to everybody else. You get what you give.
On another note, I really like the first portrait. It's great. The DoF is superb, and the detail in the eyes is spot on!
Great shot! & lol at the expression haha!
man u dont have any idea what the graffiti culture is like. im just tryin to be honest and let the guy know that his style is slopped. I am glad this same sort of advice was given to me when i started writing. graff is all about gaining fame and respect of other wrtiers and for the most part it is very different from other art forms. it def has established rules and progression that you should learn. of course every artist devolps he he styles and techniques but there is a reason that all the kings will still say your straightletters are the most important building block you have. Graffiti is ALL about letter structure, with things like fills and such as a secondary factor that you use as a tool to aid ur letter structure. His piece is colorful and fairly well painted, but the letter structure is totally bunk and if u jack about graff u could see this, and im sure he knows it to. REAL advice, get a phonebook and fill every page with straight letters and evolve some real letter styles.
the good stuff
can control isnt horrible (yea its not amazing but good for after a 3 year break, even if u are using euro paint (belton?)
the fill looks nice
THERE, i gave some real constructive feedback
examples of things that dont work in that piece that i would try to improve on....
letter structure (the basic shape and form of the letters)
lose the little motion lines added onto the top in the forcefield color (they just distract and look toy)
highlights with drips? the idea behind highlights is to provide demention. highlights wit drips dont look right
the bubbles, until u can learn to make some good looking bubbles i would leave them out. IMO it would look better without the whole "sitting in a toxic pool theme"
This post was edited by SaltheSalmon on Jul 12 2009 10:56am