I'm going to be harsh here, but please take it because I believe you have great potential!
The shot subjects are excellent, and the compositions are great.
However, I don't like phone cameras, they pretty much often suck. (Even the newest iPhone 3GS Lacks.)
However, they lack quite a bit in my opinion: The quality was rather disappointing, they could have been so much more excellent if they were more crisp, clear and didn't lack quality. (However, re-sizing them might have helped that, it's not hard to re size.)
I notice a lot of noise in all of the shots, they are grainy. (Can be fixed with a LOWER ISO)
The sky in the 2nd shot is over exposed, and then again in the water reflection in the 2nd last one. (This can be fixed by using a faster shutter speed, or lower EV Exposure.)
The 2nd last one seems to be completely blurry, with nothing in focus, I particularly think this one looks great, if perhaps the flotation device was in focus. (And again, lower exposure, faster shutter speed would achieve this)
I feel a lack of a main focusing concept in all of them. (Except for the ones of the large metal docks)
The White balance is off in the 4th, too cool, (The blueish tint to the wood. Fix the WB By setting it to "sunny" or "cloudy" depending on the weather.)
And lastly, the date in the bottom right is a huge NO NO! It distracts. Turn it off in the camera menus!
Other than that, I think you have great potential and I look forward to seeing more!!
-Spencer
This post was edited by TheBlackRose66 on Jun 22 2009 03:15pm