Really great concept and idea, I have quite a few tips that I think will actually make this photo look amazing!!
Composition, I think if you got lower to the ground, this would add to the end result.
Clarity, try to get a main focal point. Perhaps the end of the tunnel, or the ground, or one of the walls.
Exposures, I definitely think if you turn the exposure down a tad bit, it will give this shot such a
dramatic feel!
And of course as you said, perhaps if you lower the ISO you will be able to fix the bit of noise in first one.
Nice job m8, I really look forward to seeing this redone!!Maybe this is what I'm kinda visualizing, perhaps it's not that great. I think it would look much nicer if you did it yourself without such heavily editing like I did here (I hope you don't mind!!)
This post was edited by TheBlackRose66 on Apr 23 2009 04:19pm