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#1
Dec 29 2008 10:12am
I over saturated the berrys and pumped up the contrast.
(Original, Unedited First)






Give me some feedback please!!



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This post was edited by doyleo on Dec 29 2008 10:29am
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Dec 29 2008 10:14am
red is bit too oversaturated or could be bit darker, otherways colors seem good. wanna show the jpg straight from camera if u got it? Would help to see the difference

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Dec 29 2008 10:27am
Quote (Antichrist- @ Mon, Dec 29 2008, 05:14pm)
red is bit too oversaturated or could be bit darker, otherways colors seem good. wanna show the jpg straight from camera if u got it? Would help to see the difference


sorry i forgot tongue.gif

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#4
Dec 29 2008 10:36am
I think it would look better if you softened your flash, so there won't be such harsh shadows and the white reflections.
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Dec 29 2008 10:38am
Quote (TheBlackRose66 @ Mon, Dec 29 2008, 05:36pm)
I think it would look better if you softened your flash, so there won't be such harsh shadows and the white reflections.


no flash was used, it was the sunlight!

You can see by the shape of the shadows behind the first grouping of berrys
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#6
Dec 29 2008 04:28pm
More Feedback please, i wanna try improve my RAW editing skills, which are proberbly non-existent atm tongue.gif
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#7
Dec 29 2008 04:30pm
I would have left it unedited, the contrast and saturation just looks completely wrong, in the bad way, in the latter photo.
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#8
Dec 29 2008 04:30pm
Quote (Veilside @ Mon, Dec 29 2008, 10:30pm)
I would have left it unedited, the contrast and saturation just looks completely wrong, in the bad way, in the latter photo.


Yo, do you have any photos?
Please post them happy.gif
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Dec 29 2008 04:31pm
Quote (TheBlackRose66 @ Mon, Dec 29 2008, 11:30pm)
Yo, do you have any photos?
Please post them happy.gif


Stuff on my DA account, haven't done any shoots in well over a year.
http://jacques-ct.deviantart.com
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Dec 29 2008 04:32pm
Quote (Veilside @ Mon, Dec 29 2008, 11:30pm)
I would have left it unedited, the contrast and saturation just looks completely wrong, in the bad way, in the latter photo.


ok so you would not do anything at all to the original photo? just convert it straight to jpeg?
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