d2jsp
Log InRegister
d2jsp Forums > Off-Topic > Graphic Design > Photography > Rate The Photo Above You > Re-re-posting
Prev14142434445124Next
Closed New Topic New Poll
Member
Posts: 134
Joined: May 26 2003
Gold: 0.00
Dec 26 2010 02:33pm
Quote (Antichrist- @ Dec 26 2010 02:55pm)
dunno really how i feel about this. would be better if you had cropped out some from the top, but otherwise it looks good, but not very interesting. ill give it 7.5/10


http://farm6.static.flickr.com/5009/5292837613_4438e96a3e_b.jpg




9/10

Like the lighting/Tone of the picture, creeps me out too! ^_^..



Member
Posts: 18,010
Joined: Apr 8 2008
Gold: 8,653.74
Dec 26 2010 05:32pm
Quote (prosnow @ Dec 26 2010 01:33pm)
9/10

Like the lighting/Tone of the picture, creeps me out too! ^_^..



http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4090/5049110281_457a842676_b.jpg


3/10. I apologize for being so harsh, but I will at least justify myself:

-4 points for composition / creativity.
This is the oldest pose in the wedding repeirtore. It's so overused it's not even interesting anymore. I don't understand if you made them both close their eyes or simply caught a bad moment where they both did it. If you did it on purpose, I don't see it adding an artistic effect.
The composition is akward. I would've moved more to the left to get them to look a bit closer and golden ruled' them. 3/4th's on the girl and missing the feet of the guy isn't the best view you could have provided. Try to use the pillars to your advantage. The area in between the pillars is blown out and only serves as a distraction.

-3 points on the woman's stomach
The woman's stomach is the definition of unflattering. Is she pregnant? If so, I would've fixed her shirt to promote the roundness of a pregnant belly. It looks misshapen. If she's not pregnant, then that's just carelessness from your part. The stomach was the first thing I looked at.

I'm neutral on the post processing. Women like this sort of effect, and it looks like one of the present LR3 has.

+2 points on effectively focusing on the woman and the location. Her pants / belly look sharp, and her face is just a bit off to hide any imperfections. The location offers very flattering lighting, and the sun hitting her hair provides a lovely ethereal look. If she's pregnant, I'd have shot a portrait of her there. In fact, i'd have removed the guy completely (since no one gives a damn about men in photos) and just shot her.

Good luck!

Since we're showing people (and pregnant woman, if applicable above), here's my try:




This post was edited by onepagememory on Dec 26 2010 05:33pm
Member
Posts: 2,819
Joined: Oct 30 2010
Gold: 1,100.85
Dec 27 2010 07:51am
Quote (onepagememory @ Dec 27 2010 02:32am)
3/10. I apologize for being so harsh, but I will at least justify myself:

-4 points for composition / creativity.
This is the oldest pose in the wedding repeirtore. It's so overused it's not even interesting anymore. I don't understand if you made them both close their eyes or simply caught a bad moment where they both did it. If you did it on purpose, I don't see it adding an artistic effect.
The composition is akward. I would've moved more to the left to get them to look a bit closer and golden ruled' them. 3/4th's on the girl and missing the feet of the guy isn't the best view you could have provided. Try to use the pillars to your advantage. The area in between the pillars is blown out and only serves as a distraction.

-3 points on the woman's stomach
The woman's stomach is the definition of unflattering. Is she pregnant? If so, I would've fixed her shirt to promote the roundness of a pregnant belly. It looks misshapen. If she's not pregnant, then that's just carelessness from your part. The stomach was the first thing I looked at.

I'm neutral on the post processing. Women like this sort of effect, and it looks like one of the present LR3 has.

+2 points on effectively focusing on the woman and the location. Her pants / belly look sharp, and her face is just a bit off to hide any imperfections. The location offers very flattering lighting, and the sun hitting her hair provides a lovely ethereal look. If she's pregnant, I'd have shot a portrait of her there. In fact, i'd have removed the guy completely (since no one gives a damn about men in photos) and just shot her.

Good luck!

Since we're showing people (and pregnant woman, if applicable above), here's my try:

http://i364.photobucket.com/albums/oo85/LeonLeon123/HectorAlePark-97.jpg



6/10 took me a bit to understand that there is a man behind her.
here mine



Member
Posts: 7,243
Joined: Sep 19 2007
Gold: 266.50
Jan 2 2011 03:55am
Quote (DisconnectYourBrain @ Dec 27 2010 01:51pm)
6/10 took me a bit to understand that there is a man behind her.
here mine

http://img341.imageshack.us/img341/5967/imgp0589.jpg


i like this one :)

8/10


Member
Posts: 36,992
Joined: Jan 6 2007
Gold: 7,821.00
Jan 2 2011 01:40pm
Quote (PANAM @ 2 Jan 2011 10:55)
i like this one :)

8/10

http://img253.imageshack.us/img253/715/bdg6.jpg


Nice colors, nice reflection, but the composition in itself isn't that interesting!

6/10

Member
Posts: 7,243
Joined: Sep 19 2007
Gold: 266.50
Jan 2 2011 03:30pm
Quote (hestJaevel @ Jan 2 2011 07:40pm)
Nice colors, nice reflection, but the composition in itself isn't that interesting!

6/10

http://images4.bilddagboken.se/46/_u8/_u4/_u3/_u2/_u5/u843256/f/o/e95666008af72d3614fd116423511d5e75964a7ad90be747d94a2dc7d8df0d3d.jpg


like the colors
on the left sunshine on the right cold winter luv it ! 6/10


same building difo angel, maybe better :D
LR3 ofc few corrections :P
Member
Posts: 11,567
Joined: Sep 11 2008
Gold: 205.00
Jan 3 2011 04:25am
Quote (PANAM @ 3 Jan 2011 01:30)
like the colors
on the left sunshine on the right cold winter luv it ! 6/10

http://img220.imageshack.us/img220/9909/bdg5.jpg
same building difo angel, maybe better :D
LR3 ofc few corrections :P


3/10
sorry for being so harsh, but i really dont like it
the distortion, alignment, grain, b&w all put me off
i far preferred the previous pic


my 1st pic to be rated:
please state, what and why you you like/dislike about it
there is a lot i dont like about the pic, just want to see if i see/feel the same way you do



This post was edited by jayandnix on Jan 3 2011 04:28am
Member
Posts: 3,373
Joined: Dec 2 2006
Gold: 0.56
Jan 3 2011 05:23am
Quote (jayandnix @ Jan 3 2011 05:25am)
3/10
sorry for being so harsh, but i really dont like it
the distortion, alignment, grain, b&w all put me off
i far preferred the previous pic


my 1st pic to be rated:
please state, what and why you you like/dislike about it
there is a lot i dont like about the pic, just want to see if i see/feel the same way you do

http://i52.tinypic.com/jg1qo7.jpg


3/10

Like the idea, however it was poorly presented. The subject is centered and somewhat of an eye sore with all of those reflections and harsh glares..



My money seems to be fading away.. :(

This post was edited by kratos on Jan 3 2011 05:25am
Member
Posts: 7,243
Joined: Sep 19 2007
Gold: 266.50
Jan 3 2011 06:05am
Quote (kratos @ Jan 3 2011 11:23am)
3/10

Like the idea, however it was poorly presented. The subject is centered and somewhat of an eye sore with all of those reflections and harsh glares..

http://farm6.static.flickr.com/5168/5316690213_fb4b172887_z.jpg

My money seems to be fading away.. :(


money talks ! 7/10 ;-)

Member
Posts: 29,057
Joined: Aug 3 2005
Gold: 13.37
Jan 6 2011 07:46am
Quote (PANAM @ 3 Jan 2011 15:05)
money talks ! 7/10 ;-)

http://img411.imageshack.us/img411/6666/bdg1v.jpg


i guess its ok, some things are bothering me quite a bit like those branches on the left upper corner. 5/10

old shot i took about 2.5 years ago, processing was made half way, so i continued with bit more processing + cropped it today
Go Back To Photography Topic List
Prev14142434445124Next
Closed New Topic New Poll