Quote (RecoveryChannel @ 9 Nov 2010 13:34)
I think it´s a little bit too dark and could be abit more contrasty. and yeah, the dead centre kinda blows, even tho I dont really mind it all that much in this case. shot could be abit sharper. there´s no real focus point. the two people in the close background kinda ruin the shot, because if they weren´t there the person sitting on the bench in the far background would stand out alot more and would add to the picture. 5/10 as it is.
http://fc05.deviantart.net/fs70/f/2010/313/a/0/a0462f6c0416b2ea15842c3a3aa575a5-d32hel6.jpg
I like the mood in this one, not equally sure about the framing. I can take that the shot isn't straight, maybe that's on purpose? But maybe you should have taken two steps more to the right because I think there's something missing in the left side of the picture.
6/10, the mood makes this one nice, but the framing brings this shot down a little bit.
