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#31
Aug 14 2011 11:49am
First off IMHO the chick on the right is hotter than the model. Probably cause she has a camera in her hand and thats what I find sexy.

1st photo was more of a joke, there was a car beside her, but I like to have fun on shoots and joke around. Honestly I would probably crop out the wrench if I was going to use any of it.

2nd photo I love how no one has pointed out she is out of focus very slightly, and the purpose of the white balance was to simply make her blend in to it some. These are by no means final edits because admittedly I don't know how to edit.

3rd one is a crop that I liked, I agree with alice and wonderland thing, next time I'll throw some wings on her and it will fit.





I'll add couple more just to give people something to talk about other than if you would do her or not zzz.
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#32
Aug 14 2011 11:53am
Quote (Sontdp @ Aug 14 2011 10:49am)
First off IMHO the chick on the right is hotter than the model. Probably cause she has a camera in her hand and thats what I find sexy.

1st photo was more of a joke, there was a car beside her, but I like to have fun on shoots and joke around. Honestly I would probably crop out the wrench if I was going to use any of it.

2nd photo I love how no one has pointed out she is out of focus very slightly, and the purpose of the white balance was to simply make her blend in to it some. These are by no means final edits because admittedly I don't know how to edit.

3rd one is a crop that I liked, I agree with alice and wonderland thing, next time I'll throw some wings on her and it will fit.

http://www.photomyevents.com/Friends/Chastity-Lynn-Masters/Chastity-Lynn-Masters-2nd/i-pCWzG35/0/L/DSC0028-L.jpg

http://www.photomyevents.com/Friends/Chastity-Lynn-Masters/Chastity-Lynn-Masters-2nd/i-3H6kv9Z/0/L/DSC0059-L.jpg

I'll add couple more just to give people something to talk about other than if you would do her or not zzz.


blondes are hot :P
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#33
Aug 14 2011 01:34pm
Quote (onepagememory @ Aug 14 2011 09:53am)
blondes are hot :P


i would do her but there is something a little off about her, ic ant put my finger on it.

maybe long torso?
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#34
Aug 14 2011 03:34pm
Quote (SaltheSalmon @ Aug 14 2011 12:34pm)
i would do her but there is something a little off about her, ic ant put my finger on it.

maybe long torso?


That's not necessarily bad. Maybe it's a certain thickness to her.

This post was edited by onepagememory on Aug 14 2011 03:34pm
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#35
Aug 14 2011 04:59pm
Quote (SaltheSalmon @ Aug 14 2011 07:34pm)
i would do her but there is something a little off about her, ic ant put my finger on it.

maybe long torso?


Shes just average lol...

dont like that u had her in the shadows in ur 2nd picture

/e average on the heavy side :D

This post was edited by Mag1z on Aug 14 2011 04:59pm
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#36
Aug 14 2011 11:02pm
again you REALLY need to get a reflector or off camera flash
1 - is an interesting idea, but she should be sitting up right with her head tilted down a little, no1 wants to see up her nostrils
2 - focus seems slightly off (might be due to the resize / conversion), nothing interesting tho
seems like she really wants to do porn, with her outfits, poses, facial expressions tho
she really needs to be more natural

Quote (SaltheSalmon @ 14 Aug 2011 23:34)
i would do her but there is something a little off about her, ic ant put my finger on it.

maybe long torso?


i just think its the clothing, i think if she dressed better she would be hot

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#37
Aug 15 2011 01:10pm
Quote (Sontdp @ Aug 14 2011 01:49pm)
First off IMHO the chick on the right is hotter than the model.  Probably cause she has a camera in her hand and thats what I find sexy. 

1st photo was more of a joke, there was a car beside her, but I like to have fun on shoots and joke around.  Honestly I would probably crop out the wrench if I was going to use any of it.

2nd photo I love how no one has pointed out she is out of focus very slightly, and the purpose of the white balance was to simply make her blend in to it some.  These are by no means final edits because admittedly I don't know how to edit.

3rd one is a crop that I liked, I agree with alice and wonderland thing, next time I'll throw some wings on her and it will fit.

http://www.photomyevents.com/Friends/Chastity-Lynn-Masters/Chastity-Lynn-Masters-2nd/i-pCWzG35/0/L/DSC0028-L.jpg

http://www.photomyevents.com/Friends/Chastity-Lynn-Masters/Chastity-Lynn-Masters-2nd/i-3H6kv9Z/0/L/DSC0059-L.jpg

I'll add couple more just to give people something to talk about other than if you would do her or not zzz.


On the 2nd shot. Why not drop the ISO to 200 and open the aperture to 3.5 to compensate for the change. that way you won't have that much distracting bg to worry about.

This post was edited by Eek on Aug 15 2011 01:11pm
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#38
Aug 15 2011 02:08pm
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On the 2nd shot. Why not drop the ISO to 200 and open the aperture to 3.5 to compensate for the change. that way you won't have that much distracting bg to worry about.


how can you tell what iso/aperture he's made that shot at?
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#39
Aug 15 2011 02:17pm
Quote (bygdubdiesel @ Aug 15 2011 04:08pm)
how can you tell what iso/aperture he's made that shot at?


exif data.
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#40
Aug 15 2011 02:19pm
Quote (Eek @ Aug 15 2011 03:17pm)
exif data.


Oh there it is. Didn't realize he had a smugmug account.
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