1: Not bad, dislike the lack of sharpness on the car though.
2: Moving my camera while I take a long exposure :\
3: :|
4: Interesting, but out of frame bird kills the composition.
5: Interesting, but bad angle for the shot, the heat haze is killing it.
6: Don't like the colours.
7: Captured water, but the environment is boring and badly lit.
8: Can see they shot a long-ish exposure and fired the flash, works well in clubs to capture background lighting, doesn't work so well here.
9: Meh.
10: Generic, not well captured at all.
11: Awesome, but not too sure how well it corresponds to the brief, also, a little underexposed.
12: Turn your contrast down in PS.
13: No panning

14: I like Nespresso, It'd make a good coffee shop photo, not sure it fits this brief though.
15: Abstract, nice colours, doesn't really fit the brief.
Honestly, I'm not sure which one I'd pick.