Quote (CAPSULE @ Mar 24 2013 09:51pm)
try to watch how you frame the photos before you shoot,
for example the first photo, you could zoom in a bit more or get closer because there are a lot of unnecessary space thats just no interesting especially with the shallow depth of field.
the third one you can probably make the photo twice as interesting if you cut off 1/3rd of the bottom.
Still learning with the lense. It is a 18-55 stock lens, and he depth of it is really difficult to work with.
I will work on those suggestions, I appreciate it

Quote (Sefira @ Mar 24 2013 01:56pm)
First picture looks pretty amazing, puts the perspective into view.
Great job !
Thanks I appreciate it!