Only thing I like in pic #1 is the light.
Other than that, she is holding a tool the same way she would hold a dildo.
Her nails are crap (already mentioned)
Her top is really not to her advantage... weird boob contour...
Second picture, check your white balance.
When shooting in a forest, everything is green.. her hair, her face, everything.
Why cut off her legs?
Her outfit makes her look fat.
Her attitude make this picture look like it'S gonna be a bad porn shooting.
Third picture...
Don't shoot from above... she looks like a midget like Alice in Wonderland...
Again her pose is slutty and her outfit is really not for her shape.
With her legs bent the way they are, you can photoshop a horse underneet her
Moral of the story, get another model or tell her to act like a normal person (not trying to be a porn star)
And no, if I was a man, I wouldn't do her
no, if u were a man... u would do anything... this is the instinct of men. hell, i would prob even do u (no offense)