I'll get jealous :*(

I find it funnythat this forum gets a lot of activity when someone begins spamming. Lesson learned.

Well, I wasn't really sure how much control you had over the shoot, so it's hard to critique. But here goes...

1. Looks like the white balance is up the shit and the depth of field is too shallow. Not enough contrast in the lighting which really lets down the composition of her face structure. It needs more punch in the lighting. Pose is nice. Head cut off and I think she is too front on. Come more to the left and get her to look over her shoulder.

2. Very awkward pose, too saturated, white balance looks way too warm, everything is too sharp, the flash spots are a put off. I would of put flash heads outside and shot through the open blinds and used one key light up high and pointing down (maybe a dish or an octo)

3. Not bad but says nothing. Any full length shots? She looks "amazon" but the background is too blurred to give her a sense of belonging in the environment?

4. Nice candid shot but black and white doesn't suit. Dislike black backgrounds and I think one key light is boring.

5. Iseewhatyoudidthar but doesn't do much for me bro

I think your biggest problem is is that you are trying to be too technical with the lighting. Also, your DOF is way too thin in some shots!

Sorry if I sound like a cunt haha



Buy my 5d classic.




Come on a date now?

I'll come on a date! I'm semi positive my family and I will be headed there in a month or so for our summer holiday.

It's so worn out... and the shipping will add an extra cost... and it's pretty expensive... but i want it a 5d classic bad lol.

To australia? Take me with you!

I think you're too young for me bro



It'll be like 50 bucks shipped. I'm only asking ~800 bucks!!!



Stuff the shipping then, just pick it up haha

This post was edited by lithfkn on May 19 2011 11:25pm

Double post

This post was edited by lithfkn on May 19 2011 11:25pm

U.S. Dollars? That's a fuckin steal

This post was edited by onepagememory on May 19 2011 11:26pm

Sure, why not.

That's half way to a 35mm L lol

how much have you used it? how many thousands of images do you guess it's had. I know I should probably replace the shutter ;D
Any scratches on the mirror / sensor / screen (I'm especially concerned with the first two)