La tête du cheval= première page?

Le titre respire pas assez! Le site web est peu visible je lai vue 2 minute après
La largeur du texte de la page 1 et 2 est pas pareille

Tu travaille souvent avec cette texture hein?

Dsl si les commentaire sont court et peu constructif mais je suis dans mon lit sur mon ipod

Ben le texte je l'aime y fait artistique et pas dactylo...
J'sais pas ou mettre le site web
et oui la tête du cheval avec la lighe d'écriture de travers, c'est la premiere page..

ok I pushed the text of the 3rd page a little to the right and I put the web site on the left of that text (still on page 3) so it is more visible...

This post was edited by MotherOfTwo on Feb 20 2011 02:41am

from now on, you must post a translation of everything you say. French is too sexy for this forum.

Ok I moved things around and got it at the printer...
It's more expensive than I thought it would be... but it will look so awesome!!!
Hopefully it gets me many many clients!

Word of mouth > flier. Just talk talk talk to people. You'll get wayy more business from that. I don't remember the last time i launched an ad campaign.

that is true, but this will get her a foothold in the right place

Doesn't look enough professional to me.
You need something simple that looks "serious".

Do you have an example for me then?

it must look professional, but it does not need to look serious
this all depends on your target market, which obv we cant tell you what they are looking for
that is for you to figure out

hmmm sorta agree with this.