http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b252/mustangnicko/5454564129_f1721b95c0.jpg
http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b252/mustangnicko/5454564129_f1721b95c0-2.jpgOnly so much I could do with low res/no pen/no monitor
Made her nose smaller, removed her skin blemishes as best I could, fixed hair line, lengthened her eyebrow, fixed eye shadow, lightened around eyes, airbrushed oily skin, went in and did dodge/burn on dark light patches, made her hair pop a little.
If I had a full res and had all my gear I could do a much better job. The lighting setup you used was really unflattering. Try having her face positioned more front on and use a much softer light. This will decrease her largish nose and the light will soften her skin and blemishes. Harsh lighting is only good for people with exceptional skin or a good make up job.
This one is by far the best. good job there. I might try it aswell tonight, gotta go to work now.