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#141
Sep 21 2010 06:32am
Quote (hestJaevel @ Sep 21 2010 02:08pm)
Ok, thanks for the cnc.
I like that picture, it's pretty straightforward, I love the contrast between bright car in the light, and dark car in the shadows. It also looks as if you darkened the shadows a bit, and I like it.
8/10

http://images4.bilddagboken.se/89/_u8/_u4/_u3/_u2/_u5/u843256/f/o/fd54c81ae3f202e862f41d600e37c0cdb0263f10cfb2ed0ac8958b9257acd6b8.jpg


I think that´s well done, technically. the bokeh looks perfectly smooth. but then again, the composition seems to lack abit. and due to personal issues ( at least I think so ) I kinda hate the texture of the flower. it´s the complete opposite of the soft background. grungy, almost noisy........... good focus on the waterdrops tho!

Ima go with a 6/10 again m8 !

A different dimension. 2 shots. before and after. the mirror shows the place at a different time. might wanna check out the details in it :P


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#142
Sep 21 2010 06:45am
Quote (RecoveryChannel @ 21 Sep 2010 14:32)
I think that´s well done, technically. the bokeh looks perfectly smooth. but then again, the composition seems to lack abit. and due to personal issues ( at least I think so ) I kinda hate the texture of the flower. it´s the complete opposite of the soft background. grungy, almost noisy........... good focus on the waterdrops tho!

Ima go with a 6/10 again m8 !

A different dimension. 2 shots. before and after. the mirror shows the place at a different time. might wanna check out the details in it :P

http://fc08.deviantart.net/fs70/f/2010/252/8/d/8dacf68e5e79293a4a95d3ae2205585d-d2yctcc.png


Well executed, nice composition and yeah I found the reason for 2 exposures :P

I also know the composition could have been better, I thought of it when I looked at the photo in the computer, but then it was too late even though the flower is just outside the door, no moar waterdrops + other weather conditions :(
And personally, I love the texture of that flower :D

Got no other neat photo atm I'd like to present so won't rate/post one :P

This post was edited by hestJaevel on Sep 21 2010 06:45am
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#143
Sep 21 2010 09:49am
Quote (RecoveryChannel @ 21 Sep 2010 13:32)
I think that´s well done, technically. the bokeh looks perfectly smooth. but then again, the composition seems to lack abit. and due to personal issues ( at least I think so ) I kinda hate the texture of the flower. it´s the complete opposite of the soft background. grungy, almost noisy........... good focus on the waterdrops tho!

Ima go with a 6/10 again m8 !

A different dimension. 2 shots. before and after. the mirror shows the place at a different time. might wanna check out the details in it :P

http://fc08.deviantart.net/fs70/f/2010/252/8/d/8dacf68e5e79293a4a95d3ae2205585d-d2yctcc.png


I really like the idea of having two moments in time in the same photograph, although I see the image slightly grainy I do not mind at all. Overall I would say a really good try.

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#144
Sep 21 2010 11:57am
Quote (Karagor @ 21 Sep 2010 17:49)
I really like the idea of having two moments in time in the same photograph, although I see the image slightly grainy I do not mind at all. Overall I would say a really good try.

http://img811.imageshack.us/img811/9807/sunuraxxi.jpg


The subject you chose needs to be sharp in my opinion. The only thing that's sharp here is the wall, which isn't very interesting on it's own!
What I'd want to see here:
Less of the wall
larger dof!

3/10

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#145
Sep 21 2010 03:12pm
Quote (hestJaevel @ 21 Sep 2010 20:57)
The subject you chose needs to be sharp in my opinion. The only thing that's sharp here is the wall, which isn't very interesting on it's own!
What I'd want to see here:
Less of the wall
larger dof!

3/10

http://images4.bilddagboken.se/90/_u8/_u4/_u3/_u2/_u5/u843256/f/o/e7a118050d99a883b96eff20676367585f93e8ed4701cb9d79edff35218027a2.jpg


i dont like the exposure and those weeds in the front are distracting. if there wasnt any weeds and you would crop alot form the bottom and exposure would be better, this would be pretty cool, but too many things wrong as it is, so ill give it 2/10

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#146
Sep 21 2010 03:18pm
Quote (Antichrist- @ Sep 21 2010 11:12pm)
i dont like the exposure and those weeds in the front are distracting. if there wasnt any weeds and you would crop alot form the bottom and exposure would be better, this would be pretty cool, but too many things wrong as it is, so ill give it 2/10

http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4087/4972059271_9e6ec47f60_b.jpg


good capture. well composed. great moment. the bright lights are a tad too much for my opinion, because they look like fricken supernovas :D
Also the grain doesnt add to the image in this case, and the lensflare is abit distracting. other than that, a solid concert shot. 6/10 again



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#147
Sep 23 2010 01:35pm
Quote (RecoveryChannel @ 21 Sep 2010 23:18)
good capture. well composed. great moment. the bright lights are a tad too much for my opinion, because they look like fricken supernovas :D
Also the grain doesnt add to the image in this case, and the lensflare is abit distracting. other than that, a solid concert shot. 6/10 again


http://fc02.deviantart.net/fs71/f/2010/252/e/3/e316efb1321888a46219d6da4bb5d861-d2yct3l.png


Great photo! 9/10


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#148
Sep 23 2010 01:51pm
Quote (hestJaevel @ Sep 23 2010 09:35pm)
Great photo! 9/10


http://images4.bilddagboken.se/85/_u8/_u4/_u3/_u2/_u5/u843256/f/o/f78b5a90923f37ca094d86f093d5ad177ed24143145ee19ce01a25fceb7e3d0a.jpg


ughhhhh dunno about this man. I see what you were trying to do with that, but the shot didnt turned out too well imO. there´s too much negative space. it looks like a random bright orb with a few branches wrapped around it. just too strong of a focal. furthermore, could it be that you used dodge and burn on it? because the brighter silhouettes really look strange and washed out. ut also looks quite blurry.

I have to give this a 3/10 only this time.



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#149
Sep 23 2010 01:57pm
Quote (RecoveryChannel @ 23 Sep 2010 21:51)
ughhhhh dunno about this man. I see what you were trying to do with that, but the shot didnt turned out too well imO. there´s too much negative space. it looks like a random bright orb with a few branches wrapped around it. just too strong of a focal. furthermore, could it be that you used dodge and burn on it? because the brighter silhouettes really look strange and washed out. ut also looks quite blurry.

I have to give this a 3/10 only this time.


http://fc07.deviantart.net/fs71/f/2010/266/2/d/pepsi_by_rookie_art-d2zbp5r.png


Yeah I see, didn't really edit it at all though.
It's just a shot aimed at the moon with the focus on a branch.
It was really dark outside, I could have taken the shot two hours before to get a bit more light on the branch rather then using the moon alone ^_^

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#150
Sep 23 2010 02:33pm
Quote (RecoveryChannel @ 23 Sep 2010 20:51)
ughhhhh dunno about this man. I see what you were trying to do with that, but the shot didnt turned out too well imO. there´s too much negative space. it looks like a random bright orb with a few branches wrapped around it. just too strong of a focal. furthermore, could it be that you used dodge and burn on it? because the brighter silhouettes really look strange and washed out. ut also looks quite blurry.

I have to give this a 3/10 only this time.


http://fc07.deviantart.net/fs71/f/2010/266/2/d/pepsi_by_rookie_art-d2zbp5r.png


The image is distorted and the composition has nothing so interesting, it seems a random shooting.





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