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jayandnix

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#11

May 8 2012 01:11am

Quote (MotherOfTwo @ 8 May 2012 00:56)

Can you detail what is the issue with the make up? To me it looks fabulous!

left eye (1st pic), the eye shadow isnt faded out nicely, and nail polish on the thumb has grown out a bit (unless she has really bad cuticles)

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May 10 2012 06:13am

Quote (lithfkn @ May 8 2012 06:08am)

Not bad bro

Few things, mainly with the retouching..

First one: Fix all the fly aLiquify her elbow in. Theres a line on her left arm, and its a little rough, a few hairs too. The face is too hot, pull the mid tones down. Would probably liquify the right side of her jaw line and her left shoulder could be pushed in. Brush her hair or fix things as you shoot, fixing stray hairs is a pain.

Second one: Similar things

thanks ! Will get back to that again when I got time. Totally agree. I have to take more care of the little details while shooting. I always end up finding small mistakes once I got them in PS, which I could have fixed during the shoot. It´s a pain

By the way, for people who are interested in a natural lips version :

[img][IMG]http://farm8.staticflickr.com/7214/7170342566_43198abdd0_b.jpg[/img][/IMG]

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May 10 2012 06:18am

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May 11 2012 04:26am

i dont know shit about technical department of pro portraits so ill just comment in layman terms.

the nose freakishly reminds me of MJ.

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May 11 2012 06:24am

Quote (The_Punisher @ May 11 2012 12:26pm)

i dont know shit about technical department of pro portraits so ill just comment in layman terms.

the nose freakishly reminds me of MJ.

http://dakzoekje.nl/images/michael-jackson-hair.jpg

if anything, I´m a photographer not a plastic surgeon. altough, that´s not quite right. but I`m more experienced with liposuction than with noses.

nobody is perfect I guess.

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#16

May 11 2012 06:48am

yes, you should get into noses.

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