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Apr 17 2012 10:46am
Quote (lithfkn @ Apr 17 2012 01:33am)
Like 7, 8, 9 good work bro.

I don't like the other model and the first 3 she has horrible clothes.

Do you have a make up artist or she does it herself? It's very flat but that could also be the retouching.

It would pay off big time if you used a proper MUA. Even if it's just a uni student that will trade makeup for pics.


I had a MUA with me for the first model. The second did it herself.


here´s a closer shot of the first model witht he same makeup. its not perfect imO, but it helped.


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Apr 17 2012 11:30am
rokiet send me you email i need to ask you some things if you dont mind ;)
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Apr 17 2012 05:24pm
Quote (RoOkieTeRra @ Apr 18 2012 02:46am)
I had a MUA with me for the first model. The second did it herself.


here´s a closer shot of the first model witht he same makeup. its not perfect imO, but it helped.

http://farm6.staticflickr.com/5234/7084314001_b03874750a_b.jpg


Way too much foundation.. the colour on the lips and eyes are pretty bad and don't go with what she is wearing :(

This post was edited by lithfkn on Apr 17 2012 05:38pm
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Apr 17 2012 06:07pm
I agree with lithfkin, I dont like the first model.

The second is beautiful though, and all the shots with her are amaaaaazing. I do like the shots in the field too, just still, the model is a bit bleh.

Adore all the pp too.
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Apr 17 2012 09:01pm
7 Looks great! I love the grass in front to make it have that neat appearance. Nice shots!
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Apr 17 2012 11:36pm
Those are some truly amazing shots! Great work!
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Apr 18 2012 07:40am
Quote (bygdubdiesel @ Apr 16 2012 11:36pm)
Expressions are really boring imo.


This, i feel ike this is what you/your models lack the most marco.
Posing is really bad imo.
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Apr 21 2012 10:56pm
got any nudes?
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May 1 2012 11:28am
6 is my favorite, i wish you had the aperture a bit higher so we could see a little bit of the grass.
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