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Mar 21 2011 09:51pm
Quote (CitizenScuba @ Mar 21 2011 08:05pm)
I like watching you. Nothing wrong about that.


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Mar 21 2011 11:04pm
the only thing I dont like is the "gimmick" effect in the photo-viewer. The adjusting of the brightness just makes my eyes hurt and is way too flashy. Also, it makes me question your choice of post-processing.
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Mar 22 2011 12:49am
Quote (onepagememory @ Mar 21 2011 09:14pm)
on "about" section:
Several spelling / grammatical yuckies, such as the first sentence, where the two clauses should be separated by at least a ; or made into individual sentences, and the word "truely," which is a mispelled version of 'truly' and stuck out at me like a thorn.

The contact page has a photo that takes FOREVER to load.

Not sure why the 'locomotive' section is titled that way.

You out to at least include a photo of yourself in about section

Some of the flower shots don't really belong to a 'landscape' section, but should have their own section instead, as there are plenty of flower photo enthusiasts.


Great site overall! Finally, all of eek's talent into one place. Is this just for your personal showcase or do you actually intend to offer photography services from this page?


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Alright.. Fixed the grammar mistakes in the about me page. Updated with my own photo.

Changed locomotive to automotive, deleted few flower pics from the landscape gallery and finally fixed the broken gallery links.

Quote (WolfFang15 @ Mar 22 2011 01:04am)
the only thing I dont like is the "gimmick" effect in the photo-viewer. The adjusting of the brightness just makes my eyes hurt and is way too flashy. Also, it makes me question your choice of post-processing.


Which photos are you referring to? I don't actually do alot of post processing at all :/
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Mar 22 2011 01:18am
What is the purpose of your website?

Just to hold a gallery or to show prospective clients a selection of work?
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Mar 22 2011 01:18am
Good work ! Great shoots ! That's for the start ;)
One suggestions :
Change gallery view so when one picture appears in main window other (left and right) cant be seen.

Just of the curiosity witch WP themes you using for this one mate ?
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Mar 22 2011 06:47am
Quote (Eek @ Mar 21 2011 11:49pm)
Alright.. Fixed the grammar mistakes in the about me page. Updated with my own photo.

Changed locomotive to automotive, deleted few flower pics from the landscape gallery and finally fixed the broken gallery links.



Which photos are you referring to? I don't actually do alot of post processing at all :/


You removed "interwebz" and replaced it with internet! automatic loss of your personality from what I've seen here :(
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Mar 22 2011 10:11pm
I think it's very neat, literally. It's simple and what I like to call elegant. And it doesn't take 400 years to load, :thumbsup:

Perhaps there could be more stuff in the site as you make it. But I am sure you have plans for that yet.
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