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Feb 6 2011 09:13pm
I think the first shot is great, well done there.'

The cropping/composition I don't really like on the sailboat and the sunken ship... things are cut off it doesn't fit my eyes right.


Quote (kratos @ Feb 6 2011 08:58pm)
He just signed up on Flickr, so it's likely they are all his..

http://www.flickr.com/photos/59200568@N07/

Get into some groups, and get some exposure.

But don't let it go to your head, like some people do.


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Feb 6 2011 09:55pm
whats going on..
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Feb 6 2011 09:59pm
Very nice i see now
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Feb 6 2011 10:07pm
#2 is fantastic and all of them seem very personal. #3 doesn't fit the style I see in the others.
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Feb 7 2011 12:24am
Quote (Photography @ Feb 6 2011 02:22pm)
Flower;
http://farm6.static.flickr.com/5060/5422590653_7fe38d03be.jpg

Sunken ship;
http://farm6.static.flickr.com/5012/5423167038_41d68f8bdd.jpg

Sail boat;
http://farm6.static.flickr.com/5259/5423180120_7ecbe964f6.jpg

Moonlight Leaf;
http://farm6.static.flickr.com/5216/5423174588_8e02de5c01.jpg


the flower pic seems a bit too close
bottom area of the sunken ship img is a bit too dark
If I had a widescreen monitor, I'd use the sail boat one as my background ofc.
I didn't like the moon leaf one because it was too cropped/drawn around the leaf and had no background

best one is definitely the sunset
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Feb 7 2011 05:04am
Quote (Act1 @ Feb 7 2011 07:24am)
the flower pic seems a bit too close
bottom area of the sunken ship img is a bit too dark
If I had a widescreen monitor, I'd use the sail boat one as my background ofc.
I didn't like the moon leaf one because it was too cropped/drawn around the leaf and had no background

best one is definitely the sunset


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Feb 7 2011 05:27am
God I love all this spam..
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Feb 7 2011 05:57am
Very nice shots!
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Feb 7 2011 06:14am
Quote (bergmann @ Feb 7 2011 03:14am)
Ok here's some criticism...#3 isn't great.

That's about it.

If you took these I would like to know what you did for the lighting in #1


post editing makes it possible :O
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Quote (Verdena @ Feb 7 2011 04:33am)


If those are yours really nice.
3 is so bad compared to the others.


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