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Antisk8er

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#11

Jul 24 2009 12:40pm

Quote (Chibi_GeishA @ Fri, Jul 24 2009, 11:24am)

okay, I tried it in black and white, and no flash..
http://i914.photobucket.com/albums/ac345/croesbass18/CIMG0148.jpg

Definitely better
Try to resize your photos though.
I can't fit the whole thing on my screen.
And its hard to give an accurate critique without seeing the whole thing in one view.
Take Care,
~Donny

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#12

Jul 24 2009 01:18pm

Quote (Antisk8er @ Fri, 24 Jul 2009, 20:40)

Definitely better
Try to resize your photos though.
I can't fit the whole thing on my screen.
And its hard to give an accurate critique without seeing the whole thing in one view.
Take Care,
~Donny

Yep. I agree. Another thing you could try would be to make the subject more off-center. Spot-on shots often feel intruding as the subject takes up the entire frame.

Chibi_GeishA

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#13

Jul 24 2009 01:19pm

Quote (Antisk8er @ Fri, Jul 24 2009, 08:40pm)

Definitely better
Try to resize your photos though.
I can't fit the whole thing on my screen.
And its hard to give an accurate critique without seeing the whole thing in one view.
Take Care,
~Donny

hm.. good point ^^ it's just, i use photobucket and i dont know how to use it right..
but i'll give it a try